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Reviewer: Adabow ( talk · contribs) 08:11, 7 March 2011 (UTC) reply

• Several dab links to fix
• No dead ELs
• There are severe MoS issues, especially with the lead section
• The article lacks in inline citations. Every fact, except common knowledge, needs sourcing through an inline citation. Every paragraph needs at least one citation, and every single quote needs a citation.
• File:HoleSamanthaintro.ogg is a far too high a quality. There should definitely not be any "citation needed" tags.

I will allow a few days for some serious cleanup to take place before I review the article in more depth. Adabow ( talk · contribs) 08:11, 7 March 2011 (UTC) reply

I am sorry, but due to the lack of response, and the MoS, prose and referencing issues, I will fail this nomination. Please re-nominate it once these have been addressed. Adabow ( talk · contribs) 20:37, 10 March 2011 (UTC) reply