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Nominator: Epicgenius ( talk · contribs) 00:30, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: 750h+ ( talk · contribs) 06:48, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
Guess I'll take this @ Epicgenius: 750 h+ 06:48, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
East of the office wing is the Centennial Memorial Temple. which has a triple-story opening whose design was intended to welcome visitors.Has a very prominent grammar mistake.
although Walker used brick and cast stone, as well as stepped archways, to createhave a comma before "to"?
although Walker used brick and cast stone (as well as stepped archways) to create. The phrasing "...Walker used brick, cast stone, and stepped archways..." doesn't really work because stepped archways isn't a construction material. Epicgenius ( talk) 16:35, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
The office wing on 14th Street.==> "The office wing is on 14th Street."
By the 2010s, the dormitory had 199 rooms and catered to a wider range of women between the ages of 18 and 50,this is a full sentence. why is there a comma at the end
March 1893, with the intention of erecting a six-story building dedicated to his mother.==> "March 1893 to erect a six-story building dedicated to his mother."
prompted complaints from local residents.remove "local"
They formed a splinter group—God's American Volunteers, later Volunteers of America—with the intention of attracting Salvationists.==> "They formed a splinter group—God's American Volunteers, later Volunteers of America—to attract Salvationists."
already contemplating a redevelopmentremove "a".
Five images in the article. They are all appropriately licensed and each have WP:ALT text. Image review pass. 750 h+ 03:56, 28 May 2024 (UTC)
Source review. Source quality seems fine using the Cite Highlighter script. Spot check incoming.
Source review pass. 750 h+ 06:00, 28 May 2024 (UTC)
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Nominator: Epicgenius ( talk · contribs) 00:30, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: 750h+ ( talk · contribs) 06:48, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
Guess I'll take this @ Epicgenius: 750 h+ 06:48, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
East of the office wing is the Centennial Memorial Temple. which has a triple-story opening whose design was intended to welcome visitors.Has a very prominent grammar mistake.
although Walker used brick and cast stone, as well as stepped archways, to createhave a comma before "to"?
although Walker used brick and cast stone (as well as stepped archways) to create. The phrasing "...Walker used brick, cast stone, and stepped archways..." doesn't really work because stepped archways isn't a construction material. Epicgenius ( talk) 16:35, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
The office wing on 14th Street.==> "The office wing is on 14th Street."
By the 2010s, the dormitory had 199 rooms and catered to a wider range of women between the ages of 18 and 50,this is a full sentence. why is there a comma at the end
March 1893, with the intention of erecting a six-story building dedicated to his mother.==> "March 1893 to erect a six-story building dedicated to his mother."
prompted complaints from local residents.remove "local"
They formed a splinter group—God's American Volunteers, later Volunteers of America—with the intention of attracting Salvationists.==> "They formed a splinter group—God's American Volunteers, later Volunteers of America—to attract Salvationists."
already contemplating a redevelopmentremove "a".
Five images in the article. They are all appropriately licensed and each have WP:ALT text. Image review pass. 750 h+ 03:56, 28 May 2024 (UTC)
Source review. Source quality seems fine using the Cite Highlighter script. Spot check incoming.
Source review pass. 750 h+ 06:00, 28 May 2024 (UTC)