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Reviewer: Rlink2 ( talk · contribs) 02:16, 25 March 2022 (UTC)
This is a short (but beautiful) GA so my comments wont be as long as the others.
Use browser find and replace to figure out what i am talking about
The Boston and Maine Railroad took over the Boston and Lowell in 1887.
I know what you are trying to say here but a reader might not. Maybe you could rephrase if possible (not required, but would be nice)
with the motive power changing to diesel locomotives.
what does "motive power" mean?
North Reading,
remove the comma here maybe?
Sources look good. Archived one reference at Wayback (ghostarchive, which is the only other one that can do pdf, is down at this moment) Stable history, all that looks good.
Overall, very impressed as usual.
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Reviewer: Rlink2 ( talk · contribs) 02:16, 25 March 2022 (UTC)
This is a short (but beautiful) GA so my comments wont be as long as the others.
Use browser find and replace to figure out what i am talking about
The Boston and Maine Railroad took over the Boston and Lowell in 1887.
I know what you are trying to say here but a reader might not. Maybe you could rephrase if possible (not required, but would be nice)
with the motive power changing to diesel locomotives.
what does "motive power" mean?
North Reading,
remove the comma here maybe?
Sources look good. Archived one reference at Wayback (ghostarchive, which is the only other one that can do pdf, is down at this moment) Stable history, all that looks good.
Overall, very impressed as usual.