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MWright96 (
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19:50, 21 May 2020 (UTC)
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Shall be reviewing this article as part of the
GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020.
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose):
b (
MoS for
lead,
layout,
word choice,
fiction, and
lists): ![](https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/thumb/9/94/Symbol_support_vote.svg/16px-Symbol_support_vote.svg.png)
- It is factually accurate and
verifiable.
- a (
reference section):
b (citations to
reliable sources):
c (
OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (
major aspects):
b (
focused):
- It follows the
neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by
images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have
fair use rationales):
b (
appropriate use with
suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
Lead
- "and provided service between the ports of Ludington, Michigan, and Manitowoc, Wisconsin," - provided a service or provided services
Railroad car ferry
- "and had two twelve foot propellers" - please use the convert template on the text highlighted in bold
- "had a displacement of some 4,050 tons" - same query as above
- "propellers for its driving force." - to drive it or a phrase along those lines
Done --
Doug Coldwell (
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13:04, 22 May 2020 (UTC)
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- "that produced 2,500 horsepower." - same query as above
- "It was unique in that it" - The steamship
- "on February 17, 1897." - the year doesn't need to be mentioned; can be either February 17 or the following day or the next day
- "On February 21, 1897," - same issue as above
- Any information on when the vessel was retired and/or broken up?
Done --
Doug Coldwell (
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14:14, 22 May 2020 (UTC)
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References
- Reference 5 is lacking the page number
- Reference 8 looks to be missing the page number
Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/query the points raised above.
MWright96
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11:42, 22 May 2020 (UTC)
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- @
MWright96: All issues have been addressed. Can you take another look. Thanks.--
Doug Coldwell (
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14:23, 22 May 2020 (UTC)
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- @
Doug Coldwell: Now promoting to GA class.
MWright96
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18:02, 22 May 2020 (UTC)
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