No need for that ref at the end of the first para of the lead. Nothing else is referenced in the lead.
Done.
"design Edward L. Ryerson. The construction of Edward L. Ryerson" repetitive.
Done.
"April 20, 1959 in" comma after 1959.
Done.
"when keel was laid" her keel?
Done.
""She was launched on January 21, 1960. She was named after the chairman of the board at Inland Steel between 1940 and 1953." maybe other way round, and merge such short sentences.
"record breaking" hyphenate.
Done.
"lakers" slang.
Done.
""over 23,000 tons" convert.
To what? The rest of the weight measurements in the article do not apply here.
"on August 28, 1962 after" comma after year.
Done.
"25,018 tons"" convert.
To what?
"shipping seasons" I didn't know such a thing exists. Is that a Great Lakes thing?
No need for that ref at the end of the first para of the lead. Nothing else is referenced in the lead.
Done.
"design Edward L. Ryerson. The construction of Edward L. Ryerson" repetitive.
Done.
"April 20, 1959 in" comma after 1959.
Done.
"when keel was laid" her keel?
Done.
""She was launched on January 21, 1960. She was named after the chairman of the board at Inland Steel between 1940 and 1953." maybe other way round, and merge such short sentences.
"record breaking" hyphenate.
Done.
"lakers" slang.
Done.
""over 23,000 tons" convert.
To what? The rest of the weight measurements in the article do not apply here.
"on August 28, 1962 after" comma after year.
Done.
"25,018 tons"" convert.
To what?
"shipping seasons" I didn't know such a thing exists. Is that a Great Lakes thing?