I have reviewed this article. I found no gaping holes, MOS issues or anything substantial. Just two points before I pass it:
'SM UB-11 was broken up in Germany' is mentioned thrice in such a tiny article; twice in the lead and once in the text following. I suppose it should be made 1 in the lead and 1 after.
Same is true for 'She was used exclusively in a training role throughout the war'. It is mentioned twice in the lead and once in the text following. But not only that, in the main body of the text, the word 'probably' is used, whereas the lead suggests that this is 100% sure. This is a bit confusing and needs some clarification. -
DSachan (
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14:31, 9 April 2009 (UTC)reply
As part of reworking the lead, I've echoed the wording used in the body of the article which better captures what is known about the submarine. —
Bellhalla (
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14:54, 13 April 2009 (UTC)reply
I am assuming no image of the submarine is available. If one can be found, it would be great.
There are some fair-use images of different Type UB Is (should be visible in
Category:Type UB I U-boats), but I'm hesitant to use a fair-use image of a sister ship. (Ordinarily I don't mind using a free-use photo of a sister ship if that's all there is, but I think it's a little on the sketchy side to use a fair-use image for that.) —
Bellhalla (
talk)
14:54, 13 April 2009 (UTC)reply
I have reviewed this article. I found no gaping holes, MOS issues or anything substantial. Just two points before I pass it:
'SM UB-11 was broken up in Germany' is mentioned thrice in such a tiny article; twice in the lead and once in the text following. I suppose it should be made 1 in the lead and 1 after.
Same is true for 'She was used exclusively in a training role throughout the war'. It is mentioned twice in the lead and once in the text following. But not only that, in the main body of the text, the word 'probably' is used, whereas the lead suggests that this is 100% sure. This is a bit confusing and needs some clarification. -
DSachan (
talk)
14:31, 9 April 2009 (UTC)reply
As part of reworking the lead, I've echoed the wording used in the body of the article which better captures what is known about the submarine. —
Bellhalla (
talk)
14:54, 13 April 2009 (UTC)reply
I am assuming no image of the submarine is available. If one can be found, it would be great.
There are some fair-use images of different Type UB Is (should be visible in
Category:Type UB I U-boats), but I'm hesitant to use a fair-use image of a sister ship. (Ordinarily I don't mind using a free-use photo of a sister ship if that's all there is, but I think it's a little on the sketchy side to use a fair-use image for that.) —
Bellhalla (
talk)
14:54, 13 April 2009 (UTC)reply