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Well written. Would be picking up the review, and amending straight forward changed; you know the drill. Feel free to revert/change any mistakes that I make while I edit the article.
Is it well written?
A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
As always, I cannot really find out many errors in such a brilliantly written article, so just a few minor nit-picks!
We could have ALT texts for the images (not necessary though).
Added
"... convened on 16 September" of the same year?
Yeah, the same year
"Konteradmiral (Rear Admiral) ..." we could keep it consistent with "... Navy Commander (Marinekommandant)", by keeping "Rear Admiral outside and "Konteradmiral" inside the brackets.
Fixed, though I went the other way, standardizing on the official term and providing the translation in the parentheses
Similarly for "Marinesektion (Naval Section of the War Ministry) ..." You could also change "Navy Commander (Marinekommandant)" to match the other such occurrences for consistency.
Same as above
"... every tenth of" I think a "one" could be tossed in to make "... every one-tenth of".
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Well written. Would be picking up the review, and amending straight forward changed; you know the drill. Feel free to revert/change any mistakes that I make while I edit the article.
Is it well written?
A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
As always, I cannot really find out many errors in such a brilliantly written article, so just a few minor nit-picks!
We could have ALT texts for the images (not necessary though).
Added
"... convened on 16 September" of the same year?
Yeah, the same year
"Konteradmiral (Rear Admiral) ..." we could keep it consistent with "... Navy Commander (Marinekommandant)", by keeping "Rear Admiral outside and "Konteradmiral" inside the brackets.
Fixed, though I went the other way, standardizing on the official term and providing the translation in the parentheses
Similarly for "Marinesektion (Naval Section of the War Ministry) ..." You could also change "Navy Commander (Marinekommandant)" to match the other such occurrences for consistency.
Same as above
"... every tenth of" I think a "one" could be tossed in to make "... every one-tenth of".