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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 ( talk · contribs) 09:49, 6 August 2017 (UTC) reply

This article is in good shape. A few comments:

• No dabs or duplicate links
• categorisation seems sensible
• suggest pointing out that the guns were muzzle-loaders if that was the case
  • Done
• the guns in the body and infobox don't match, they are 9 cm in the body and 87 mm in the infobox, and 7cm in the body and 66 mm in the infobox
  • Fixed
• suggest linking knots
  • It's linked in the design section
• linking ship commissioning
  • Done
• suggest stating what sort of ship Radetzky was
  • Good idea
• gunnery or artillery school? the terms seem to be used interchangeably, perhaps better to be consistent?
  • Done
• when the remaining four 47 mm guns are mentioned, worth stating these were the QF ones, not the bow-mounted one
  • Good catch
• the image licensing needs work, shouldn't it be PD-because?
  • Yup, fixed.

That's me done. Peacemaker67 ( click to talk to me) 09:59, 6 August 2017 (UTC) reply

Thanks again. Parsecboy ( talk) 12:03, 7 August 2017 (UTC) reply

This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by an appropriately licensed image with an appropriate caption. Passing. Peacemaker67 ( click to talk to me) 04:18, 8 August 2017 (UTC) reply