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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 ( talk · contribs) 16:33, 16 August 2014 (UTC) reply

I'll get to this shortly.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 16:33, 16 August 2014 (UTC) reply

• No issues with DABs, external links or overlinking.
• Images appropriately licensed, although few in number. Aren't there any available from the Jamestown celebration?
  • Unfortunately none that I can track down, and it doesn't appear that the other ships have photos from the event, unlike the Fulton celebrations a couple of years later. I might ask Dominic to see if there might be any in NARA's holdings.
• I reworked the infobox a bit to conform to my preferences.
  • Looks fine to me.
• Suggest that you add "transverse" to bulkheads where appropriate.
  • Good catch.
• Link keel and launching
  • Added
• Use the ampersand in the bibliography to match your usage in the footnotes. Otherwise nicely done.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 02:15, 21 August 2014 (UTC) reply
  • Added - at some point, I'll have added this to enough articles that when I copy them for new articles, they'll have this already ;) Thanks for reviewing the article, Sturm - and by the way, have you seen my last comments on the Formidable ACR? Parsecboy ( talk) 11:10, 21 August 2014 (UTC) reply
    • No, I don't think so, but things have been a bit hectic around here with the move and all.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 12:44, 21 August 2014 (UTC) reply