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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 ( talk · contribs) 03:03, 17 August 2018 (UTC) reply

This article is in fine shape. A few comments from me:

• the rounding of the length in the infobox and body doesn't match
  • Forgot the "in" part
• the draft is converted into decimal feet in the body, should be ftin
  • I could've sworn I fixed all of these when I started writing this series - apparently not.
• the engine didn't drive the boilers, it was the other way around. Reword?
  • Good catch, that hadn't occurred to me ;)
• where were the guns positioned? all broadside?
  • Yes
• Prussian Ministryer of War
  • Good catch
• link ship commissioning
  • Done
• suggest "deployment in the interest of improving the crew's rations, rather than relying entirely on hardtack."
  • That works for me
• suggest "necessity offor their presence"?
  • Done
• perhaps mention Saint Thomas was a Danish possession at the time
  • Good idea
• perhaps translate Unterleutnant zur See as you've done with the other rank
  • Done
• perhaps note that Halifax is in Nova Scotia (or Canada)
  • Good catch.

That's it. Placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Cheers, Peacemaker67 ( click to talk to me) 03:28, 17 August 2018 (UTC) reply

Thanks Peacemaker! Parsecboy ( talk) 11:49, 17 August 2018 (UTC) reply

This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by an appropriately licensed image with an appropriate caption. Passing. Peacemaker67 ( click to talk to me) 02:26, 18 August 2018 (UTC) reply