Section 1; Consistency maintained, all the parameters—Displacement, Length, Beam, Draft, Power, Propulsion, Speed, Armament and armor—seem fine. Conversion templates and link s in right place.
Section 2; para 1; The commissioning date is never mentioned. Is it not available?
Not that I've seen anywhere - Conway's just gives the completion date, which is probably not the same. It's probably available in Sieche's book but I haven't been able to get my hands on a copy - there aren't many in the US.
Section 2; para 1; Is it necessary to mention the 1875 to Don Juan d'Austria, as it is already linked previously.
Good catch, that one had been linked, and apparently I didn't remove all of it when I de-linked it.
Section 2; para 3; then-Captain Anton Haus; suggest mentioning that Haus was the Commander of the Navy later, in parenthesis.
Good idea
Lead; it is mentioned that she was armed with ten 47 mm (1.9 in) guns, but in the prose it was four 47 mm (1.9 in) quick-firing guns and six 47 mm revolver cannon, aren't these two different?
Yes, but for the purposes of the lead, it's ok to summarize them that way since they are all 47 mm guns.
Section 1; Consistency maintained, all the parameters—Displacement, Length, Beam, Draft, Power, Propulsion, Speed, Armament and armor—seem fine. Conversion templates and link s in right place.
Section 2; para 1; The commissioning date is never mentioned. Is it not available?
Not that I've seen anywhere - Conway's just gives the completion date, which is probably not the same. It's probably available in Sieche's book but I haven't been able to get my hands on a copy - there aren't many in the US.
Section 2; para 1; Is it necessary to mention the 1875 to Don Juan d'Austria, as it is already linked previously.
Good catch, that one had been linked, and apparently I didn't remove all of it when I de-linked it.
Section 2; para 3; then-Captain Anton Haus; suggest mentioning that Haus was the Commander of the Navy later, in parenthesis.
Good idea
Lead; it is mentioned that she was armed with ten 47 mm (1.9 in) guns, but in the prose it was four 47 mm (1.9 in) quick-firing guns and six 47 mm revolver cannon, aren't these two different?
Yes, but for the purposes of the lead, it's ok to summarize them that way since they are all 47 mm guns.