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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 ( talk · contribs) 23:06, 13 December 2013 (UTC) reply

I'll get to this shortly.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 23:06, 13 December 2013 (UTC) reply

  • overseas cruiser duty for "overseas duties"?
    • Sure.
  • Consolidate the separate class and type entries into the class entry as Bussard-class unprotected cruiser
    • Good point.
  • There are a bunch of disagreements between the infobox and the design paragraph, which, btw, is really a description.
    • Yeah, that was the infobox from Bussard.
  • Why did the Portuguese cruiser require a tow?
    • Hildebrand et. al. don't say.
  • One m or two in Pomerania?
    • Typo.
  • What's a Bismarck tower?
  • I know what Polizei-Soldaten are, but most readers won't. Move the explanation to the first use.
    • Done.
  • Make sure that all of the articles on this class mention that Geier is their sister ship.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 23:20, 20 December 2013 (UTC) reply
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

Article ( | visual edit | history) · Article talk ( | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 ( talk · contribs) 23:06, 13 December 2013 (UTC) reply

I'll get to this shortly.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 23:06, 13 December 2013 (UTC) reply

  • overseas cruiser duty for "overseas duties"?
    • Sure.
  • Consolidate the separate class and type entries into the class entry as Bussard-class unprotected cruiser
    • Good point.
  • There are a bunch of disagreements between the infobox and the design paragraph, which, btw, is really a description.
    • Yeah, that was the infobox from Bussard.
  • Why did the Portuguese cruiser require a tow?
    • Hildebrand et. al. don't say.
  • One m or two in Pomerania?
    • Typo.
  • What's a Bismarck tower?
  • I know what Polizei-Soldaten are, but most readers won't. Move the explanation to the first use.
    • Done.
  • Make sure that all of the articles on this class mention that Geier is their sister ship.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 23:20, 20 December 2013 (UTC) reply

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