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Reviewer: Iazyges ( talk · contribs) 14:44, 17 November 2017 (UTC) reply

I'll take this one. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 14:44, 17 November 2017 (UTC) reply

In light of full complaince, I will instant pass and make some prose suggestions. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 16:21, 17 November 2017 (UTC) reply

Criteria

GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

  • 1
    1.a checkY
    1.b checkY
  • 2
    2.a checkY
    2.b checkY
    2.c checkY
    2.d checkY
  • 3
    3.a checkY
    3.b checkY
  • 4
    4.a checkY
  • 5
    5.a checkY
  • 6
    6.a checkY
    6.b checkY
  • No DAB links ☒N, "Central Pacific" is DAB link.
  • No Dead links checkY
  • Images appropriately licensed checkY

Prose Suggestions

  • "Intended for service in the German colonial empire, the ship was designed with a combination of steam and sail power for extended range, and was equipped with a battery of ten 15-centimeter (5.9 in) guns." Would "Intended to serve with" work better as an into?
  • That's my only suggestion; good job! -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 16:28, 17 November 2017 (UTC) reply
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

Article ( | visual edit | history) · Article talk ( | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Iazyges ( talk · contribs) 14:44, 17 November 2017 (UTC) reply

I'll take this one. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 14:44, 17 November 2017 (UTC) reply

In light of full complaince, I will instant pass and make some prose suggestions. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 16:21, 17 November 2017 (UTC) reply

Criteria

GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

  • 1
    1.a checkY
    1.b checkY
  • 2
    2.a checkY
    2.b checkY
    2.c checkY
    2.d checkY
  • 3
    3.a checkY
    3.b checkY
  • 4
    4.a checkY
  • 5
    5.a checkY
  • 6
    6.a checkY
    6.b checkY
  • No DAB links ☒N, "Central Pacific" is DAB link.
  • No Dead links checkY
  • Images appropriately licensed checkY

Prose Suggestions

  • "Intended for service in the German colonial empire, the ship was designed with a combination of steam and sail power for extended range, and was equipped with a battery of ten 15-centimeter (5.9 in) guns." Would "Intended to serve with" work better as an into?
  • That's my only suggestion; good job! -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 16:28, 17 November 2017 (UTC) reply

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