"The film revolves around three characters; one follows his heart, the second uses his brain and the third uses his brawn. " — "The film revolves around three characters; the first follows his heart, the second uses his brain and the third uses his brawn."
"Filming began at Ramanaidu Studios in Hyderabad on 10 April 2014." — Shift it to filming section and change "Filming began on 22 September at a Hyderabad mall." to "Principal photography began on 22 September at a Hyderabad-based shopping mall."
"Ileana D'Cruz, the female lead in Srinivas' films Jalsa (2008) and Julai, reportedly agreed to perform an item number in the film (her comeback in Telugu cinema) for a high fee." — If D'Cruz was in the film, then why isn't she mentioned in the "Cast" section?
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Ssven2Speak 2 me09:02, 17 July 2015 (UTC)reply
"he asked Srinivas for the name." — "he requested Srinivas to use the name for the titular character's son."
"Arjun trained hard for the fight sequences, and hired a well-known gymnast to learn flips, somersaults and other gymnastic skills for his stunts." — Who's the gymnast? If there's no info on him, then rephrase the sentence as simply "Arjun learned flips, somersaults and other gymnastic skills to perform his stunts."
"The film revolves around three characters; one follows his heart, the second uses his brain and the third uses his brawn. " — "The film revolves around three characters; the first follows his heart, the second uses his brain and the third uses his brawn."
"Filming began at Ramanaidu Studios in Hyderabad on 10 April 2014." — Shift it to filming section and change "Filming began on 22 September at a Hyderabad mall." to "Principal photography began on 22 September at a Hyderabad-based shopping mall."
"Ileana D'Cruz, the female lead in Srinivas' films Jalsa (2008) and Julai, reportedly agreed to perform an item number in the film (her comeback in Telugu cinema) for a high fee." — If D'Cruz was in the film, then why isn't she mentioned in the "Cast" section?
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Ssven2Speak 2 me09:02, 17 July 2015 (UTC)reply
"he asked Srinivas for the name." — "he requested Srinivas to use the name for the titular character's son."
"Arjun trained hard for the fight sequences, and hired a well-known gymnast to learn flips, somersaults and other gymnastic skills for his stunts." — Who's the gymnast? If there's no info on him, then rephrase the sentence as simply "Arjun learned flips, somersaults and other gymnastic skills to perform his stunts."