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Reviewer: Iazyges ( talk · contribs) 14:10, 16 August 2019 (UTC) reply

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Discussion

Prose Suggestions

Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.

• honor of the victories of Admiral Fyodor Ushakov suggest honor of the victorious battles of Admiral Fyodor Ushakov
• The destroyer bombarded Alushta before it was captured by the amphibious detachment, suggest The destroyer bombarded Alushta before the city was captured by the amphibious detachment, kind of confusing; initially thought the Gadzhibey had been captured.
• @ Kges1901 and Sturmvogel 66: That is all my suggestions, passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 17:19, 19 August 2019 (UTC) reply
  • Good ideas both. Thanks for the review.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 18:53, 19 August 2019 (UTC) reply