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Reviewer: Auntieruth55 ( talk · contribs) 18:10, 8 May 2018 (UTC)
Hi, I'll be starting this review in about 24 hours. Just FYI! auntieruth (talk) 18:10, 8 May 2018 (UTC) Reviewer's comments: Overall, this is a very good article. I've "edited" out some of the puffery, which falls under item 4. We really try not to words that could be construed as biased. Please read through and see if my minor copy edits are satisfactory to you, and let me know. auntieruth (talk) 19:10, 8 May 2018 (UTC)
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Hi, I'll be starting this review in about 24 hours. Just FYI! auntieruth (talk) 18:10, 8 May 2018 (UTC) Reviewer's comments: Overall, this is a very good article. I've "edited" out some of the puffery, which falls under item 4. We really try not to words that could be construed as biased. Please read through and see if my minor copy edits are satisfactory to you, and let me know. auntieruth (talk) 19:10, 8 May 2018 (UTC)
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