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Hi, I will be reviewing your article for GA. Overall, it looks just fine - as usual with your articles. I suggest a little more context for the general reader to be able to follow along, especially in the lead. I will go through it some more and see if there is anything else. It looks like a very good job! —
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Thanks for taking on the review. I added some information, so I believe all of the points above have been covered. Please let me know if anything else comes up. GaryColemanFan ( talk) 05:13, 31 October 2008 (UTC)
Just a few more comments
I have attempted to address both concerns. As for the second one, it's one of those aspects of a staged fight. Bret Hart can attack Diesel's legs for half an hour, but that can all be pushed aside if Diesel makes a comeback. Diesel wouldn't necessarily even walk with a limp (or, at times, you can see a wrestler limping on the wrong leg when they forget which one the opponent has supposedly been attacking). Hart working on the leg is supposed to be a setup for the Sharpshooter, so I added that it (in reality, however, the Sharpshooter places the pressure on the lower back, but that part is conveniently left out of the commentary). GaryColemanFan ( talk) 23:34, 31 October 2008 (UTC)
Final GA review (see here for criteria)
Good job on the article! — Mattisse ( Talk) 00:04, 1 November 2008 (UTC)
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Hi, I will be reviewing your article for GA. Overall, it looks just fine - as usual with your articles. I suggest a little more context for the general reader to be able to follow along, especially in the lead. I will go through it some more and see if there is anything else. It looks like a very good job! —
Mattisse (
Talk) 23:46, 30 October 2008 (UTC)
Thanks for taking on the review. I added some information, so I believe all of the points above have been covered. Please let me know if anything else comes up. GaryColemanFan ( talk) 05:13, 31 October 2008 (UTC)
Just a few more comments
I have attempted to address both concerns. As for the second one, it's one of those aspects of a staged fight. Bret Hart can attack Diesel's legs for half an hour, but that can all be pushed aside if Diesel makes a comeback. Diesel wouldn't necessarily even walk with a limp (or, at times, you can see a wrestler limping on the wrong leg when they forget which one the opponent has supposedly been attacking). Hart working on the leg is supposed to be a setup for the Sharpshooter, so I added that it (in reality, however, the Sharpshooter places the pressure on the lower back, but that part is conveniently left out of the commentary). GaryColemanFan ( talk) 23:34, 31 October 2008 (UTC)
Final GA review (see here for criteria)
Good job on the article! — Mattisse ( Talk) 00:04, 1 November 2008 (UTC)