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Sorry for the delay in reviewing; Christmas and real life got in the way! Overall, the article is well written, referenced, organised and illustrated. I have a couple of suggestions for further improvement.
It's very close to GA, so I don't have a huge list of suggestions. So I can happily pass the article, can you please improve the flow of the Background section and fix the few referencing problems? I've placed the article on hold for one week to give you time to do this. Regards, Somno ( talk) 04:34, 29 December 2008 (UTC)
Congratulations, this article meets GA criteria. I believe there could be further expansion in the Background and Aftermath sections in the future, but the article is sufficiently broad and focused for GA status. Somno ( talk) 01:52, 31 December 2008 (UTC)
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Sorry for the delay in reviewing; Christmas and real life got in the way! Overall, the article is well written, referenced, organised and illustrated. I have a couple of suggestions for further improvement.
It's very close to GA, so I don't have a huge list of suggestions. So I can happily pass the article, can you please improve the flow of the Background section and fix the few referencing problems? I've placed the article on hold for one week to give you time to do this. Regards, Somno ( talk) 04:34, 29 December 2008 (UTC)
Congratulations, this article meets GA criteria. I believe there could be further expansion in the Background and Aftermath sections in the future, but the article is sufficiently broad and focused for GA status. Somno ( talk) 01:52, 31 December 2008 (UTC)