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Reviewer: AJona1992 ( talk) 13:19, 6 June 2011 (UTC)
"It was released on June 22, 2010 as the lead single from the band's second album, A Year Without Rain" can you add the year the album was released, like other GA-Class song articles. Ex: "It was released on June 22, 2010 as the lead single from the band's second album, A Year Without Rain (2010)
"Bill Lamb of About.com praised Gomez's vocal maturity and rock edge likely thanks to producer Kevin Rudolf, calling the song "effortless" and would "sound good after months of airplay." Read the source, and it didn't say "likey thanks" which sounds orish to me.
"The filming of the video was made by Phillip Andelman, and took place in late May 2010 in Budapest, Hungary during the filming of her film, Monte Carlo." source?
"and on Blue Peter on September 28, 2010" why not say "and on Blue Peter on the following day"
Is Bop and Tigerbeat reliable sources?
File:Roundandround.ogg has a length of 31s, however, per SAMPLE, "10% of the length of the original song up to a maximum of 30 seconds".
Overall, I'm going to put this article
On hold to allow further responses and fixes. Good luck,
AJona1992 (
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00:02, 7 June 2011 (UTC)
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Reviewer: AJona1992 ( talk) 13:19, 6 June 2011 (UTC)
"It was released on June 22, 2010 as the lead single from the band's second album, A Year Without Rain" can you add the year the album was released, like other GA-Class song articles. Ex: "It was released on June 22, 2010 as the lead single from the band's second album, A Year Without Rain (2010)
"Bill Lamb of About.com praised Gomez's vocal maturity and rock edge likely thanks to producer Kevin Rudolf, calling the song "effortless" and would "sound good after months of airplay." Read the source, and it didn't say "likey thanks" which sounds orish to me.
"The filming of the video was made by Phillip Andelman, and took place in late May 2010 in Budapest, Hungary during the filming of her film, Monte Carlo." source?
"and on Blue Peter on September 28, 2010" why not say "and on Blue Peter on the following day"
Is Bop and Tigerbeat reliable sources?
File:Roundandround.ogg has a length of 31s, however, per SAMPLE, "10% of the length of the original song up to a maximum of 30 seconds".
Overall, I'm going to put this article
On hold to allow further responses and fixes. Good luck,
AJona1992 (
talk)
00:02, 7 June 2011 (UTC)