This article is in an extremely poor condition. The whole article feels like it was written by the organization's own PR department, for example because it contains multiple "If interested in [...], send an email to: xxx@raicesdeesperanza.org" sections.
Also, the article should at least mention that the organization is linked to the ZunZuneo ("Cuban Twitter") scandal. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 5.147.136.49 ( talk) 17:02, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
- Summary thread header added. Agree, Wiki-articles are not supposed to promote their topics' goals or ideas. I did a fair amount of cleanup (see also WP:EL for external links usage), but more could be done adding more independent reliable sources and working on a neutral, uninvolved language. Have tagged the article for improvements in those aspects. PS: editors connected with the organization should read WP:COI for some general guidance. GermanJoe ( talk) 08:27, 1 March 2015 (UTC)
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This article is in an extremely poor condition. The whole article feels like it was written by the organization's own PR department, for example because it contains multiple "If interested in [...], send an email to: xxx@raicesdeesperanza.org" sections.
Also, the article should at least mention that the organization is linked to the ZunZuneo ("Cuban Twitter") scandal. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 5.147.136.49 ( talk) 17:02, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
- Summary thread header added. Agree, Wiki-articles are not supposed to promote their topics' goals or ideas. I did a fair amount of cleanup (see also WP:EL for external links usage), but more could be done adding more independent reliable sources and working on a neutral, uninvolved language. Have tagged the article for improvements in those aspects. PS: editors connected with the organization should read WP:COI for some general guidance. GermanJoe ( talk) 08:27, 1 March 2015 (UTC)