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"through the national selection Selecția Națională 2006" - it should be made more clearer that it was a national selection competition
"Romania ultimately reached fourth place in the contest's Grand Final," - the date of the Grand Final of Eurovision 2006 is missing here
Selecția Națională 2006
"a competition in order to select their entrant for the Eurovision Song Contest 2006." - the words "in order" are redundant in this sentence
"was eventually disqualified from the contest due to having received television and radio airplay" - the text in bold should be written as due to the song for clarity and completeness
"to 1 October 2005, TVR's cutoff date." - to TVR's cutoff date of 1 October 2005.
"by Heaven were voluntarily withdrawn" - make it clear that the performers voluntarily withdrew their songs as stated in România Liberă
Indiggo controversy
"In a late-night talk show following the winner's announcement," - the announcement of the winner,
"they based the accusation on reports that their voting line was continuously busy and so people were unable to vote for them when they called." - , preventing people from voting for them when they called.
Promotion
"Starting with 20 April 2006," - correct saying; should be on or from
At Eurovision
"the show was aired on TVR," - broadcast is more formal
"which yielded in various changes" - saw various changes
"selected countries, except the host country" - try to not repeat the same word close together in the same sentence
"qualified to the final due to their top 11 result the preceding year." - how about result in the 2005 contest. instead?
"A reported €160,000 were" - was
Voting
"Below is a breakdown of points awarded to Romania in the Grand Final, as well as by Romania in the semi-final" - try not to repeat the country's name in the same sentence
"Romania finished in fourth position, being awarded a total of 172 points including 12 by Moldova and Spain, as well as ten by" - 172 points, including 12 by
Moldova and
Spain, and ten from
Cyprus,
Israel,
Malta and
Portugal.
"For the Grand Final points announcement," - For the announcement of its points in the Grand Final,
References
The spelling to EscToday in Reference 22 should be spelt as ESCToday for consistency
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Eurovision-related topics on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
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"through the national selection Selecția Națională 2006" - it should be made more clearer that it was a national selection competition
"Romania ultimately reached fourth place in the contest's Grand Final," - the date of the Grand Final of Eurovision 2006 is missing here
Selecția Națională 2006
"a competition in order to select their entrant for the Eurovision Song Contest 2006." - the words "in order" are redundant in this sentence
"was eventually disqualified from the contest due to having received television and radio airplay" - the text in bold should be written as due to the song for clarity and completeness
"to 1 October 2005, TVR's cutoff date." - to TVR's cutoff date of 1 October 2005.
"by Heaven were voluntarily withdrawn" - make it clear that the performers voluntarily withdrew their songs as stated in România Liberă
Indiggo controversy
"In a late-night talk show following the winner's announcement," - the announcement of the winner,
"they based the accusation on reports that their voting line was continuously busy and so people were unable to vote for them when they called." - , preventing people from voting for them when they called.
Promotion
"Starting with 20 April 2006," - correct saying; should be on or from
At Eurovision
"the show was aired on TVR," - broadcast is more formal
"which yielded in various changes" - saw various changes
"selected countries, except the host country" - try to not repeat the same word close together in the same sentence
"qualified to the final due to their top 11 result the preceding year." - how about result in the 2005 contest. instead?
"A reported €160,000 were" - was
Voting
"Below is a breakdown of points awarded to Romania in the Grand Final, as well as by Romania in the semi-final" - try not to repeat the country's name in the same sentence
"Romania finished in fourth position, being awarded a total of 172 points including 12 by Moldova and Spain, as well as ten by" - 172 points, including 12 by
Moldova and
Spain, and ten from
Cyprus,
Israel,
Malta and
Portugal.
"For the Grand Final points announcement," - For the announcement of its points in the Grand Final,
References
The spelling to EscToday in Reference 22 should be spelt as ESCToday for consistency