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Hello @ Magiciandude: (Erick), I said I was going to review this article and I am. Sorry it has taken this long to do so. I read the comments on the FAC so I can get a better understanding on why the article failed and to see if any changes that you made since then has satisfied the comments left by Eddie since he was the only one who opposed the article's promotion.
In the lead "Miguel promoted the album with a tour of the United States and Latin America", I suggest revising this sentence similar to your previous FA feat Formula, Vol. 1. There are too many instances of "album" and "song" throughout the article, which Eddie brought up in his FAC review. A revision for this sentence "The original plans were, as usual, for Calderón to compose new material made up of pop songs and ballads as well as find songs for Miguel to cover in Spanish." needs to be tell the reader(s) that Calderon was Miguel's principal composer without it being WP:EDITORIAL, I am also not feeling the whole sentence in general which is why I suggest you to rewrite it. Another editorial sentence (Ultimately, he was unable to compose original songs for the album) was found two sentences down. Replace "the" between "of" and "project" to avoid using the same word again in the same sentence in "over the production of project". I also did some minor editing on the article that I found while reading. The article does look better since its last FAC review, but since I found several minor errors and the consistency of using "album" and "song" again throughout the article, I believe it needs more eyes on editors who no nothing about Luis Miguel or his works to give you a better, more complete review. Though, I can see the article being a FA soon. Best and Happy New Years, .jona talk 17:30, 29 January 2015 (UTC)
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I thought I already did this, but this is probably where I got the edit conflict and forgot about it
for the first parenthesis, I think the second one is fine since it's just saying what the new song is
I only removed the parenthesis from the info about the album being displaced. I kept the parenthesis with the acronyms for obvious reasons, but I don't know what to do with the one that says the album was later certified platinum
Thanks again for the review AJona1992! I'm feeling confident in renominating the article for FAC. I have a quick question about the awards even though you didn't bring it up. "Premio Eres" was an award ceremony by Eres magazine which was a popular Mexican magazine. If it should be mentioned that Eres was a magazine, then how would you suggest rewriting it? Erick ( talk) 14:37, 19 March 2015 (UTC)
@ AJona1992: Alright so I did the PR and addressed everything Nikkimaria brought up. Any last minute fixings that might need to be done before I resubmit this to FAC? Erick ( talk) 00:50, 25 March 2015 (UTC)
Why is his named treated as if it was a last name ("Miguel, Luis"). For example, "Miguel had a contractual deadline with his label", "Miguel and Manzanero produced the album", "praising Miguel's vocals". © Tbhotch ™ ( en-2.5). 08:19, 19 November 2015 (UTC)
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According to the latest source of sales in Argentina, we can say that it is the best-selling album in the history of Argentina?, at least until 1999. We should change "and the bestselling record in Argentina by a non-native artist" to "bestselling record in Argentina of all time". In October 1999, the diamond award were revealed with sales:
1) Luis Miguel Romance 1.041.730
2) Luis Miguel Segundo Romance 813.082
3) Luis Miguel Aries 693.162
4) Julio Iglesias El Amor 678.285
5) Luis Miguel Romances 676.136
6) Julio Iglesias Emociones 636.294
7) Soledad Poncho Al Viento 620.510
8) Fito Paez El Amor Despues Del Amor 614.869
9) Michael Jackson Thriller 576.779
10) Julio Sosa Album De Oro 551.890
11) Queen Greatest Hits Vol. II 506.916
Greetings. Franlm14 ( talk) 02:13, 13 May 2019 (UTC)
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Hello @ Magiciandude: (Erick), I said I was going to review this article and I am. Sorry it has taken this long to do so. I read the comments on the FAC so I can get a better understanding on why the article failed and to see if any changes that you made since then has satisfied the comments left by Eddie since he was the only one who opposed the article's promotion.
In the lead "Miguel promoted the album with a tour of the United States and Latin America", I suggest revising this sentence similar to your previous FA feat Formula, Vol. 1. There are too many instances of "album" and "song" throughout the article, which Eddie brought up in his FAC review. A revision for this sentence "The original plans were, as usual, for Calderón to compose new material made up of pop songs and ballads as well as find songs for Miguel to cover in Spanish." needs to be tell the reader(s) that Calderon was Miguel's principal composer without it being WP:EDITORIAL, I am also not feeling the whole sentence in general which is why I suggest you to rewrite it. Another editorial sentence (Ultimately, he was unable to compose original songs for the album) was found two sentences down. Replace "the" between "of" and "project" to avoid using the same word again in the same sentence in "over the production of project". I also did some minor editing on the article that I found while reading. The article does look better since its last FAC review, but since I found several minor errors and the consistency of using "album" and "song" again throughout the article, I believe it needs more eyes on editors who no nothing about Luis Miguel or his works to give you a better, more complete review. Though, I can see the article being a FA soon. Best and Happy New Years, .jona talk 17:30, 29 January 2015 (UTC)
accumulative
I thought I already did this, but this is probably where I got the edit conflict and forgot about it
for the first parenthesis, I think the second one is fine since it's just saying what the new song is
I only removed the parenthesis from the info about the album being displaced. I kept the parenthesis with the acronyms for obvious reasons, but I don't know what to do with the one that says the album was later certified platinum
Thanks again for the review AJona1992! I'm feeling confident in renominating the article for FAC. I have a quick question about the awards even though you didn't bring it up. "Premio Eres" was an award ceremony by Eres magazine which was a popular Mexican magazine. If it should be mentioned that Eres was a magazine, then how would you suggest rewriting it? Erick ( talk) 14:37, 19 March 2015 (UTC)
@ AJona1992: Alright so I did the PR and addressed everything Nikkimaria brought up. Any last minute fixings that might need to be done before I resubmit this to FAC? Erick ( talk) 00:50, 25 March 2015 (UTC)
Why is his named treated as if it was a last name ("Miguel, Luis"). For example, "Miguel had a contractual deadline with his label", "Miguel and Manzanero produced the album", "praising Miguel's vocals". © Tbhotch ™ ( en-2.5). 08:19, 19 November 2015 (UTC)
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According to the latest source of sales in Argentina, we can say that it is the best-selling album in the history of Argentina?, at least until 1999. We should change "and the bestselling record in Argentina by a non-native artist" to "bestselling record in Argentina of all time". In October 1999, the diamond award were revealed with sales:
1) Luis Miguel Romance 1.041.730
2) Luis Miguel Segundo Romance 813.082
3) Luis Miguel Aries 693.162
4) Julio Iglesias El Amor 678.285
5) Luis Miguel Romances 676.136
6) Julio Iglesias Emociones 636.294
7) Soledad Poncho Al Viento 620.510
8) Fito Paez El Amor Despues Del Amor 614.869
9) Michael Jackson Thriller 576.779
10) Julio Sosa Album De Oro 551.890
11) Queen Greatest Hits Vol. II 506.916
Greetings. Franlm14 ( talk) 02:13, 13 May 2019 (UTC)