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Reviewer: hamiltonstone ( talk) 01:16, 18 January 2011 (UTC)
The article appears neutral, stable and appropriately referenced. It has no images. It might be appropriate (not in the infobox) to include one of Trinity, as the place where he was educated, though only, I suggest, if the buildings in the photo date to that period. Otherwise, the image is getting too far removed from its subject.
I have done some copyediting for clarity. Please indicate if any of those changes causes concern. In particular, I removed the introductory phrase "As a writer..." from the sentence referring to his translation, partly for stylistic reasons, but partly because that would normally be referred to as the work of a translator, not a writer, i think.
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Just about there, though I'm unused to this level of reliance on tertiary sources (i'm referring only to the extent: I use them regularly myself in biographical articles). Cheers, hamiltonstone ( talk) 01:31, 18 January 2011 (UTC)
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Reviewer: hamiltonstone ( talk) 01:16, 18 January 2011 (UTC)
The article appears neutral, stable and appropriately referenced. It has no images. It might be appropriate (not in the infobox) to include one of Trinity, as the place where he was educated, though only, I suggest, if the buildings in the photo date to that period. Otherwise, the image is getting too far removed from its subject.
I have done some copyediting for clarity. Please indicate if any of those changes causes concern. In particular, I removed the introductory phrase "As a writer..." from the sentence referring to his translation, partly for stylistic reasons, but partly because that would normally be referred to as the work of a translator, not a writer, i think.
Other points:
Just about there, though I'm unused to this level of reliance on tertiary sources (i'm referring only to the extent: I use them regularly myself in biographical articles). Cheers, hamiltonstone ( talk) 01:31, 18 January 2011 (UTC)