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Reviewer: Carbrera ( talk · contribs) 04:20, 31 March 2016 (UTC)
Hello, I am
Carbrera, and I'll be reviewing this article for possible good article submission.
Full review coming very soon. Carbrera ( talk) 04:20, 31 March 2016 (UTC)
A pretty strong article with some minor changes that need to be made. I'll put it on hold for seven days; thank you! Carbrera ( talk) 04:40, 10 April 2016 (UTC)
Some responses: I have made many of the changes you recommended; they made perfect sense. There were a few, however, that I had trouble understanding:
If these names name were interjections, using commas here would be a no-brainer. So if it said "After the film's producer, Charles Band, approved..." it would be fine. As it is, however, these are similar to what you might hear on the intro to a making-of featurette you might find on a DVD: "when producer Steven Spielberg approached director Tobe Hooper to direct the film...". This isn't an interjection but rather a profession that goes with the title listed. Of course, if something exists in the MOS here that I'm unaware of, I'd be happy to change it, but one wouldn't naturally pause in these situations. Is there something I'm missing?
I don't know if I understand. This is the final phrase in the sentence.
I highly doubt any more exist, outside of the blog echo-chamber (many of which are citing this article). I've tried to reference more easily accessible sources whenever possible, but sometimes all that was available with this information were a few magazine and newspaper articles.
If this must be spelled out, then it must be hyphenated all the way through. I don't see it in the WP:MOS, but the Chicago MOS makes this clear.
This would be redundant, as "El" means "the" in Spanish.
Runfellow ( talk) 22:25, 16 April 2016 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Carbrera ( talk · contribs) 04:20, 31 March 2016 (UTC)
Hello, I am
Carbrera, and I'll be reviewing this article for possible good article submission.
Full review coming very soon. Carbrera ( talk) 04:20, 31 March 2016 (UTC)
A pretty strong article with some minor changes that need to be made. I'll put it on hold for seven days; thank you! Carbrera ( talk) 04:40, 10 April 2016 (UTC)
Some responses: I have made many of the changes you recommended; they made perfect sense. There were a few, however, that I had trouble understanding:
If these names name were interjections, using commas here would be a no-brainer. So if it said "After the film's producer, Charles Band, approved..." it would be fine. As it is, however, these are similar to what you might hear on the intro to a making-of featurette you might find on a DVD: "when producer Steven Spielberg approached director Tobe Hooper to direct the film...". This isn't an interjection but rather a profession that goes with the title listed. Of course, if something exists in the MOS here that I'm unaware of, I'd be happy to change it, but one wouldn't naturally pause in these situations. Is there something I'm missing?
I don't know if I understand. This is the final phrase in the sentence.
I highly doubt any more exist, outside of the blog echo-chamber (many of which are citing this article). I've tried to reference more easily accessible sources whenever possible, but sometimes all that was available with this information were a few magazine and newspaper articles.
If this must be spelled out, then it must be hyphenated all the way through. I don't see it in the WP:MOS, but the Chicago MOS makes this clear.
This would be redundant, as "El" means "the" in Spanish.
Runfellow ( talk) 22:25, 16 April 2016 (UTC)