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Reviewer: Adam Cuerden ( talk · contribs) 08:47, 12 December 2016 (UTC)
Let's get this started. Generally speaking, on a first look-over, I see two big problems: Some uncited text in the "Legends" and "Birth" section, and way too many images. There's four separate galleries in this article, as well as numerous side images. Choose the best examples of each type, or expand the article to justify it more. For example, if you discuss the monolithic statues, you can easily justify more images of them, and will have space to include them.
But some of the images are going to need to go whatever's done; I'd suggest starting with the ones that don't thumbnail as well, the ones that are most similar to other images, and ones that give the same information as other images. Try to eliminate some of the galleries.
Sources used seem good; I can't readily check them.
As I said, I'm nto an expert in this. Since he apparently appears in Hindu and Buddhist scriptures, though, I think we need a discussion of how his depiction varies from Jain texts. If it does. Adam Cuerden ( talk) 08:47, 12 December 2016 (UTC)
That's a long list, I know, but that should get everything, subject to any issues with the edited text. I think this will also be most of the way to featured article once it's done, and I'd suggest a peer review be started once it reaches GA. Adam Cuerden ( talk) 21:24, 13 December 2016 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Adam Cuerden ( talk · contribs) 08:47, 12 December 2016 (UTC)
Let's get this started. Generally speaking, on a first look-over, I see two big problems: Some uncited text in the "Legends" and "Birth" section, and way too many images. There's four separate galleries in this article, as well as numerous side images. Choose the best examples of each type, or expand the article to justify it more. For example, if you discuss the monolithic statues, you can easily justify more images of them, and will have space to include them.
But some of the images are going to need to go whatever's done; I'd suggest starting with the ones that don't thumbnail as well, the ones that are most similar to other images, and ones that give the same information as other images. Try to eliminate some of the galleries.
Sources used seem good; I can't readily check them.
As I said, I'm nto an expert in this. Since he apparently appears in Hindu and Buddhist scriptures, though, I think we need a discussion of how his depiction varies from Jain texts. If it does. Adam Cuerden ( talk) 08:47, 12 December 2016 (UTC)
That's a long list, I know, but that should get everything, subject to any issues with the edited text. I think this will also be most of the way to featured article once it's done, and I'd suggest a peer review be started once it reaches GA. Adam Cuerden ( talk) 21:24, 13 December 2016 (UTC)