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Reviewer: Hahc21 ( talk · contribs) 21:45, 21 December 2012 (UTC)
The prose needs work. I found several non-compliant prose issues through the article, and here are a few examples only from the composition section:
References look good overall, but they need polish to be at a full standard.
I am afraid that this article is not complete. It misses a commercial performance section that can be perfectly created, as well as other information, such as how the song came into existence, the relation between this song, the EP it belongs to, and her previous work.
For these reasons, I'd have to fail the article: it fails 1(a) and possibly 1(b), as well as, in some sort, 3(a). Regards. — ΛΧΣ 21 22:07, 21 December 2012 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Hahc21 ( talk · contribs) 21:45, 21 December 2012 (UTC)
The prose needs work. I found several non-compliant prose issues through the article, and here are a few examples only from the composition section:
References look good overall, but they need polish to be at a full standard.
I am afraid that this article is not complete. It misses a commercial performance section that can be perfectly created, as well as other information, such as how the song came into existence, the relation between this song, the EP it belongs to, and her previous work.
For these reasons, I'd have to fail the article: it fails 1(a) and possibly 1(b), as well as, in some sort, 3(a). Regards. — ΛΧΣ 21 22:07, 21 December 2012 (UTC)