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Ride (Lana Del Rey song) was nominated as a Music good article, but it did not meet the good article criteria at the time (December 21, 2012). There are suggestions on the review page for improving the article. If you can improve it, please do; it may then be renominated. |
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The cover has been changed. The cover for the picture vinyl and vinyl is now this: http://www.amazon.com/Ride-Remixes-Explicit/dp/B00A4A2Z90/ref=sr_1_4?ie=UTF8&qid=1354805983&sr=8-4&keywords=lana+del+rey+ride teammathi ( talk) 15:00, 6 December 2012 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Hahc21 ( talk · contribs) 21:45, 21 December 2012 (UTC)
The prose needs work. I found several non-compliant prose issues through the article, and here are a few examples only from the composition section:
References look good overall, but they need polish to be at a full standard.
I am afraid that this article is not complete. It misses a commercial performance section that can be perfectly created, as well as other information, such as how the song came into existence, the relation between this song, the EP it belongs to, and her previous work.
For these reasons, I'd have to fail the article: it fails 1(a) and possibly 1(b), as well as, in some sort, 3(a). Regards. — ΛΧΣ 21 22:07, 21 December 2012 (UTC)
I don't care how many sources were cited; as far as 'sex on the pinball machine': she's just there in between the guy and the pinball machine. If you watch the video closely, you'll see the man is just forcibly hitting the paddles on the machine, like anyone playing pinball would do, not having sex. The sources are either stupid or trying to sensationalize the (already sensational) video. See for yourself! 71.139.160.140 ( talk) 05:04, 1 June 2014 (UTC)
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Ride (Lana Del Rey song) was nominated as a Music good article, but it did not meet the good article criteria at the time (December 21, 2012). There are suggestions on the review page for improving the article. If you can improve it, please do; it may then be renominated. |
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The cover has been changed. The cover for the picture vinyl and vinyl is now this: http://www.amazon.com/Ride-Remixes-Explicit/dp/B00A4A2Z90/ref=sr_1_4?ie=UTF8&qid=1354805983&sr=8-4&keywords=lana+del+rey+ride teammathi ( talk) 15:00, 6 December 2012 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Hahc21 ( talk · contribs) 21:45, 21 December 2012 (UTC)
The prose needs work. I found several non-compliant prose issues through the article, and here are a few examples only from the composition section:
References look good overall, but they need polish to be at a full standard.
I am afraid that this article is not complete. It misses a commercial performance section that can be perfectly created, as well as other information, such as how the song came into existence, the relation between this song, the EP it belongs to, and her previous work.
For these reasons, I'd have to fail the article: it fails 1(a) and possibly 1(b), as well as, in some sort, 3(a). Regards. — ΛΧΣ 21 22:07, 21 December 2012 (UTC)
I don't care how many sources were cited; as far as 'sex on the pinball machine': she's just there in between the guy and the pinball machine. If you watch the video closely, you'll see the man is just forcibly hitting the paddles on the machine, like anyone playing pinball would do, not having sex. The sources are either stupid or trying to sensationalize the (already sensational) video. See for yourself! 71.139.160.140 ( talk) 05:04, 1 June 2014 (UTC)