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03:33, 10 February 2011 (UTC)
Good work by the authors and editors involved. I've given the article a thorough copy edit, but had a few questions.
I also switched the order of the paragraphs talking about Boston police's attempt to arrest Richard and the one about the fine; they seemed to flow in chronological order that way.
Drop me a line when you've addressed the problems, and I'll be happy to pass it.
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Good work by the authors and editors involved. I've given the article a thorough copy edit, but had a few questions.
I also switched the order of the paragraphs talking about Boston police's attempt to arrest Richard and the one about the fine; they seemed to flow in chronological order that way.
Drop me a line when you've addressed the problems, and I'll be happy to pass it.
Reviewer: JKBrooks85 ( talk) 03:33, 10 February 2011 (UTC)