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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague ( talk · contribs) 17:28, 1 August 2013 (UTC)
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A pass here.
I am still bemused as to why aestheticism, "public stiffness", and aloofness would garner the sobriquet "Arias Cardinal Calderon", but even if it does, you need the proper diacritics for Calderón in every mention of the name.
"...the couple spent another month in exile in Miami." When was the first instance?
This is merely a suggestion, but I suggest you add information about the selection of Calderón, if possible.
"...a long-time opponent of the US presence in Panama..." The post-invasion presence, or the in media res-invasion presence? I am sure he was supportive of the invasion.
The rest of this section is fine, along with the last section.
This is a very sound article. As soon as everything is addressed, the article will pass. Congratulations! QatarStarsLeague ( talk) 15:39, 4 August 2013 (UTC)
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A pass here.
I am still bemused as to why aestheticism, "public stiffness", and aloofness would garner the sobriquet "Arias Cardinal Calderon", but even if it does, you need the proper diacritics for Calderón in every mention of the name.
"...the couple spent another month in exile in Miami." When was the first instance?
This is merely a suggestion, but I suggest you add information about the selection of Calderón, if possible.
"...a long-time opponent of the US presence in Panama..." The post-invasion presence, or the in media res-invasion presence? I am sure he was supportive of the invasion.
The rest of this section is fine, along with the last section.
This is a very sound article. As soon as everything is addressed, the article will pass. Congratulations! QatarStarsLeague ( talk) 15:39, 4 August 2013 (UTC)