Only one thing worries me here: a link to
wikt:crib. I could not find a MOS rule that forbids interwikimedia links in prose and it's a fairly rare word, so I'm leaving it, but I don't feel right about it and it might be an issue for FAC.
B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with
suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail:
All in all, this is indeed a great article and I've really enjoyed reading it and found very few things to correct and nothing to report here, so it's in a way a quick-pass! You should start heading toward FA status.
Admiral Norton(
talk)20:32, 1 March 2009 (UTC)reply
Thank you for taking the time to do the review and for your kind words. I plan to take this to PR soon and then, if all goes well, to make a run at FA. I agree that the link to "crib" in Wiktionary is awkward. I don't think it's against the MoS rules, but it links to a complicated list of definitions. I might be able to find enough source material to do a short article on brothel cribs.
Finetooth (
talk)
22:43, 1 March 2009 (UTC)reply
Only one thing worries me here: a link to
wikt:crib. I could not find a MOS rule that forbids interwikimedia links in prose and it's a fairly rare word, so I'm leaving it, but I don't feel right about it and it might be an issue for FAC.
B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with
suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail:
All in all, this is indeed a great article and I've really enjoyed reading it and found very few things to correct and nothing to report here, so it's in a way a quick-pass! You should start heading toward FA status.
Admiral Norton(
talk)20:32, 1 March 2009 (UTC)reply
Thank you for taking the time to do the review and for your kind words. I plan to take this to PR soon and then, if all goes well, to make a run at FA. I agree that the link to "crib" in Wiktionary is awkward. I don't think it's against the MoS rules, but it links to a complicated list of definitions. I might be able to find enough source material to do a short article on brothel cribs.
Finetooth (
talk)
22:43, 1 March 2009 (UTC)reply