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Reviewer: J Milburn ( talk · contribs) 20:52, 2 December 2011 (UTC)
Claiming this one now. Not at all the kind of video game I'd play, but I have friends who play this sort of thing, so I'm interested to learn. Review to come soon-ish. J Milburn ( talk) 20:52, 2 December 2011 (UTC)
Ok, I'm taking a read-through now.
I am yet to check the sources. I do think the article has potential, but I think a little work is needed yet. J Milburn ( talk) 23:32, 4 December 2011 (UTC)
Well, there has been absolutely no progress since I offered the thoughts above, and so I am going to close this review at this time. I am also concerned about a number of the sources- they are publications I've never heard of without Wikipedia articles; some of them look worryingly like blogs. Please try to ensure that as much information as possible is attributed to reliable sources. I urge you to work on the issues in this article and then renominate when ready. J Milburn ( talk) 12:20, 17 December 2011 (UTC)
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Reviewer: J Milburn ( talk · contribs) 20:52, 2 December 2011 (UTC)
Claiming this one now. Not at all the kind of video game I'd play, but I have friends who play this sort of thing, so I'm interested to learn. Review to come soon-ish. J Milburn ( talk) 20:52, 2 December 2011 (UTC)
Ok, I'm taking a read-through now.
I am yet to check the sources. I do think the article has potential, but I think a little work is needed yet. J Milburn ( talk) 23:32, 4 December 2011 (UTC)
Well, there has been absolutely no progress since I offered the thoughts above, and so I am going to close this review at this time. I am also concerned about a number of the sources- they are publications I've never heard of without Wikipedia articles; some of them look worryingly like blogs. Please try to ensure that as much information as possible is attributed to reliable sources. I urge you to work on the issues in this article and then renominate when ready. J Milburn ( talk) 12:20, 17 December 2011 (UTC)