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I would fist like to point out that this was my first full article and was created as part of a project- and though the article is factual I had to include an element that would not normally be considered appropriate for such an article concerning something relatively minor in the scheme of things- the section "Critical Reception". I really would like to see this article stay up on Wikipedia (as said in my handout in my project: "... provinding material for future generations of students to cheat off of..." [though not that is not the real reason I want this article to stay up]), but I feel that the article needs some changes.
I believe the following changes should be made to make the article more encyclopedic:
It would also be greatly appreciated if someone could make improve the format of this article. (I know this was a boatload of text to swallow though, so sorry for that).
*I have more to say concerning this statement and my problem so if you are interested on helping me out with this problem I would greatly appreciate it (Message me if you are).
**I understand I am a little vague on how significant "Significant" is, but that is why we have a discussion page.
--Ham Radio 00:30, 20 September 2011 (UTC)
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I would fist like to point out that this was my first full article and was created as part of a project- and though the article is factual I had to include an element that would not normally be considered appropriate for such an article concerning something relatively minor in the scheme of things- the section "Critical Reception". I really would like to see this article stay up on Wikipedia (as said in my handout in my project: "... provinding material for future generations of students to cheat off of..." [though not that is not the real reason I want this article to stay up]), but I feel that the article needs some changes.
I believe the following changes should be made to make the article more encyclopedic:
It would also be greatly appreciated if someone could make improve the format of this article. (I know this was a boatload of text to swallow though, so sorry for that).
*I have more to say concerning this statement and my problem so if you are interested on helping me out with this problem I would greatly appreciate it (Message me if you are).
**I understand I am a little vague on how significant "Significant" is, but that is why we have a discussion page.
--Ham Radio 00:30, 20 September 2011 (UTC)