A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
the layout style guideline:
B.
Reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
Studio Wishbone (
Los Angeles,
California) – It makes more sense if you set it out like that
Lead
"Remember December" is a song performed by American singer–songwriter Demi Lovato.It was written – add a space between "Lovato." and "It"
It was released as the album's second and final single on November 17, 2009 via Hollywood Records. – Change "via" to "through"
The single achieved minor – Change "The single" to "Remember December"
Background
"Remember December" was written by John Fields, Demi Lovato and Anne Preven, with production done by Fields – Change "done" to "handled"
It was recorded by Fields at Studio Wishbone, Los Angeles, California – add "in" before "Wishbone" and "Los Angeles", and link "Los Angeles, California" as well
There needs to a space between this section and the References section
References
References 3, 7, 10 – Use "cite web" instead of "cite news"
External links
No issues
OVERALL REVIEW
I have decided to put the article on hold because there are still some minor mistakes affecting the prose quality of the article. Also, the article needs a release history table. I will give you seven days to fix these mistakes.
Oztalk07:35, 11 August 2011 (UTC)reply
Ok, one more thing, was the song released as a single in the US? If not, then it shouldn't be mentioned in the lead that it failed to chart in the US. Overall I am passing the article. Keep up the good work!
Oztalk13:56, 11 August 2011 (UTC)reply
A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
the layout style guideline:
B.
Reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
Studio Wishbone (
Los Angeles,
California) – It makes more sense if you set it out like that
Lead
"Remember December" is a song performed by American singer–songwriter Demi Lovato.It was written – add a space between "Lovato." and "It"
It was released as the album's second and final single on November 17, 2009 via Hollywood Records. – Change "via" to "through"
The single achieved minor – Change "The single" to "Remember December"
Background
"Remember December" was written by John Fields, Demi Lovato and Anne Preven, with production done by Fields – Change "done" to "handled"
It was recorded by Fields at Studio Wishbone, Los Angeles, California – add "in" before "Wishbone" and "Los Angeles", and link "Los Angeles, California" as well
There needs to a space between this section and the References section
References
References 3, 7, 10 – Use "cite web" instead of "cite news"
External links
No issues
OVERALL REVIEW
I have decided to put the article on hold because there are still some minor mistakes affecting the prose quality of the article. Also, the article needs a release history table. I will give you seven days to fix these mistakes.
Oztalk07:35, 11 August 2011 (UTC)reply
Ok, one more thing, was the song released as a single in the US? If not, then it shouldn't be mentioned in the lead that it failed to chart in the US. Overall I am passing the article. Keep up the good work!
Oztalk13:56, 11 August 2011 (UTC)reply