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Some Dude From North Carolina (
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21:51, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
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The short description should go at the top of the article.
The cover's non-free use rationale looks good.
Add a serial comma between "pop, country and rock".
Add a serial comma between "Britrock, dance-pop and dubstep".
"reworked on the album" → "reworked the album"
"dubious on the genre" → "dubious about the genre"
Add a serial comma between "dance-pop, dubstep and Britrock".
Remove the comma after "Swift's perspectives".
Remove the comma after "optimism".
Add a serial comma between "country, folk and soft rock" (both times).
"climatic finale" - typo?
"On the song, Swift sings" → "In the song, Swift sings"
"a relationship that is dangerous" → "a dangerous relationship"
Remove the comma after "fear of aging".
"On "Holy Ground", Swift reminisces" → "In "Holy Ground", Swift reminisces"
"from third-person perspective" → "from a third-person perspective"
"on digital and physical formats" → "in digital and physical formats"
Add a serial comma between "Keds, Wal-Mart and Papa John's".
"review published 2019" → "review published in 2019"
Remove the comma after 69 Love Songs .
Remove the comma after "sales of 2012".
Add a hyphen between "pop inspired".
"groundwork to the" → "groundwork for the"
Remove the comma after "re-recording of Red "
"counter measure" should be written as one word.
Remove the comma after "purchase of the label".
The second #Release_history only has one release so I would remove it.
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I would change the link to [[Vulture (website)|Vulture]]
Some Dude From North Carolina (
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14:09, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
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The reference after "in September" is missing a website.
Mark sources from GQ with "|url-access=limited".
Mark sources from Los Angeles Times with "|url-access=limited".
Mark sources from Rolling Stone with "|url-access=limited".
Mark sources from The New York Times with "|url-access=limited".
Mark sources from Time with "|url-access=limited".
Mark sources from Vulture with "|url-access=limited".
Ping when done.
Some Dude From North Carolina (
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01:09, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
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Thank you for this review. Save for one question and needing to double check QWQ and CURLY, all points are completed. --
The SandDoctor
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05:38, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
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Some Dude From North Carolina : I think I have ALLCAPS and QWQ just fine, but how do I search for curly quotes? Whenever I try copying and pasting, CTRL + F just shows all quotes on the page, which isn't extraordinarily helpful. Is there a script or something that you are aware of? --
The SandDoctor
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18:11, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
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Czar : Thank you for explaining how you did it in your summary. I'll keep that in mind for future!
. Thank you for reviewing this,
Some Dude From North Carolina ! --
The SandDoctor
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00:39, 19 July 2021 (UTC)
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Not that far. I would support for FA if nominated.
Some Dude From North Carolina (
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00:45, 19 July 2021 (UTC)
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