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Is there a link or source to prove that? Would like to see that source to confirm. Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tdiscioglu ( talk • contribs) 20:58, 26 October 2019 (UTC)
There are some recent edits to:
People who have researched Dr. Crumpler know there are no known photos or images of her. The foreign language translations of this article don’t seem to know that. Is there a way to fix this? If you know how to delete photos from the translated articles please do so! Lee Price ( talk) 20:18, 28 February 2023 (UTC)
Although no photographs or other images of Crumpler survive,[35][36] a Boston Globe article described her as "a very pleasant and intellectual woman and an indefatigable church worker. Dr. Crumpler is 59 or 60 years of age, tall and straight, with light brown skin and gray hair."[37]to the target language (and then I usually translate back again to English to see what happened / if it makes sense). Interested in dividing and conquering?– CaroleHenson ( talk) 19:15, 18 July 2023 (UTC)
An IP user added some content that Crumpler also taught in Atlanta. I am not finding a reliable source for that. It cannot be added to other cited content where that's not covered, so I rolled back the edit here.
If anyone finds a source, I am happy to double check it is reliable and properly format the citation and language. Just leave a note here.– CaroleHenson ( talk) 02:01, 12 March 2020 (UTC)
This article is well written. It is informative but does not focus enough on Crumpler's life as a physician. Why is basically the same information that is in the lead restated in the body of the article? Kmpittman ( talk) 22:04, 7 April 2020 (UTC)Kmpittman
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Reviewer: SusunW ( talk · contribs) 16:56, 10 April 2020 (UTC) I'll do this one CaroleHenson. You know I am slow, but I'll get through it as quickly as I can.
primarily for poor women and childrenshould follow medicine, not Boston.
The great need for medical providers encouraged other black people to join the medical profession. Black charitable organizations and white missionary organizations provided funding for the first black medical schoolsshould precede her entering medical school?
Due to her talent, shereplace "she" with Crumpler.
Lee Crumpler graduatedis confusing. We do not know who this is. In the previous section you told us only that Davis and Crumpler were the same. (It's why I always write chronologically and weave the personal stuff in. It doesn't matter to me if you do that, but we do need to know who Lee is before you start using that term).
She was the first African-American woman in the United States to earn the degree, and the only one to graduate from New England Female Medical Collegeis very close paraphrasing. Can you reword or quote it directly?
In the early 1870s, Crumpler attended the elite West Newton English and Classical School in Massachusetts,[4][11] where she was a "special student in mathematics."Seems to dangle as isn't really related to her medical training, nor is it in chronological order. Perhaps it is better placed at the beginning of "Educator" section?
primarily for poor African-American women and childrento follow medicine.
By the time she, replace "she" with Crumpler.
In 1883, she, replace "she" with Crumpler
At the time, many early African-American authors have had their writings and books include prefaces and introductions that have a white male sounding authentication."Perhaps: At the time, writings and books by African-American authors had prefaces and introductions written in the style of white male writings to give them authentication.
and is alsoshould be past tense, was also.
While living in Charlestown, shereplace "she" with Davis (or you could use Crumpler, though that seems odd to me as that came after Lee).
She married Arthur Crumplerreplace "she" with Lee.
Crumpler was a former fugitivereplace Crumpler with Arthur.
went to Robert Adams' sonWent to implies to me that they had a choice. The article about it is a bit confusing, as it says that John Adams refused to allow him to be sold and he was instead "bid in". What does that mean?
where his family wentsame issue as above, they had no choice. Perhaps the whereabouts of those who purchased his family, or where his family were dispersed?
20 Garden Street, in what place?
I think that's it. Will go back and check your answers. You are as fast as a bunny :) SusunW ( talk) 20:18, 10 April 2020 (UTC)
I was able to find images of Rebecca Lee Crumpler but noticed this article says none survived. Not sure what to make of that or know how to add a graphic image to a wiki article, but it bothered me that there is a picture of her husband but the article says none exist of Dr Lee Wikikatzed ( talk) 19:32, 20 July 2020 (UTC)
I can find no evidence that Dr. Crumpler was trained in or practiced homeopathy. The Directory of Deceased American Physicians lists her as an “Allopath”. Homeopathy at B.U. came later. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 74.69.123.20 ( talk) 15:16, 22 August 2020 (UTC)
Although her primary focus was on the health of women and children, which seemed to be influenced by homeopathy, Crumpler recommended courses of treatment without stating that the treatment was homeopathic.
I made several edits to the article here, so I thought I would summarize where I am coming from.
If I have made some changes that you may think are incorrect, it would be good to know and come up with a good alternative.– CaroleHenson ( talk) 18:42, 18 July 2023 (UTC)
Jcejhay, I am so sorry that I reverted your edit. I did it accidentally and didn't know it until I went to my watchlist and saw that I made a change to this article. I have put it back in.– CaroleHenson ( talk) 02:03, 20 March 2024 (UTC)
Rebecca Lee Crumpler has been listed as one of the
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please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can
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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 28 August 2019 and 12 December 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Tdiscioglu.
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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 10 March 2020 and 4 May 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Kmpittman. Peer reviewers: LillianPittman, Macenzie77, Abryhiaaa.
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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 19 August 2020 and 7 December 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): VOBY Sloane.
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Is there a link or source to prove that? Would like to see that source to confirm. Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tdiscioglu ( talk • contribs) 20:58, 26 October 2019 (UTC)
There are some recent edits to:
People who have researched Dr. Crumpler know there are no known photos or images of her. The foreign language translations of this article don’t seem to know that. Is there a way to fix this? If you know how to delete photos from the translated articles please do so! Lee Price ( talk) 20:18, 28 February 2023 (UTC)
Although no photographs or other images of Crumpler survive,[35][36] a Boston Globe article described her as "a very pleasant and intellectual woman and an indefatigable church worker. Dr. Crumpler is 59 or 60 years of age, tall and straight, with light brown skin and gray hair."[37]to the target language (and then I usually translate back again to English to see what happened / if it makes sense). Interested in dividing and conquering?– CaroleHenson ( talk) 19:15, 18 July 2023 (UTC)
An IP user added some content that Crumpler also taught in Atlanta. I am not finding a reliable source for that. It cannot be added to other cited content where that's not covered, so I rolled back the edit here.
If anyone finds a source, I am happy to double check it is reliable and properly format the citation and language. Just leave a note here.– CaroleHenson ( talk) 02:01, 12 March 2020 (UTC)
This article is well written. It is informative but does not focus enough on Crumpler's life as a physician. Why is basically the same information that is in the lead restated in the body of the article? Kmpittman ( talk) 22:04, 7 April 2020 (UTC)Kmpittman
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Reviewer: SusunW ( talk · contribs) 16:56, 10 April 2020 (UTC) I'll do this one CaroleHenson. You know I am slow, but I'll get through it as quickly as I can.
primarily for poor women and childrenshould follow medicine, not Boston.
The great need for medical providers encouraged other black people to join the medical profession. Black charitable organizations and white missionary organizations provided funding for the first black medical schoolsshould precede her entering medical school?
Due to her talent, shereplace "she" with Crumpler.
Lee Crumpler graduatedis confusing. We do not know who this is. In the previous section you told us only that Davis and Crumpler were the same. (It's why I always write chronologically and weave the personal stuff in. It doesn't matter to me if you do that, but we do need to know who Lee is before you start using that term).
She was the first African-American woman in the United States to earn the degree, and the only one to graduate from New England Female Medical Collegeis very close paraphrasing. Can you reword or quote it directly?
In the early 1870s, Crumpler attended the elite West Newton English and Classical School in Massachusetts,[4][11] where she was a "special student in mathematics."Seems to dangle as isn't really related to her medical training, nor is it in chronological order. Perhaps it is better placed at the beginning of "Educator" section?
primarily for poor African-American women and childrento follow medicine.
By the time she, replace "she" with Crumpler.
In 1883, she, replace "she" with Crumpler
At the time, many early African-American authors have had their writings and books include prefaces and introductions that have a white male sounding authentication."Perhaps: At the time, writings and books by African-American authors had prefaces and introductions written in the style of white male writings to give them authentication.
and is alsoshould be past tense, was also.
While living in Charlestown, shereplace "she" with Davis (or you could use Crumpler, though that seems odd to me as that came after Lee).
She married Arthur Crumplerreplace "she" with Lee.
Crumpler was a former fugitivereplace Crumpler with Arthur.
went to Robert Adams' sonWent to implies to me that they had a choice. The article about it is a bit confusing, as it says that John Adams refused to allow him to be sold and he was instead "bid in". What does that mean?
where his family wentsame issue as above, they had no choice. Perhaps the whereabouts of those who purchased his family, or where his family were dispersed?
20 Garden Street, in what place?
I think that's it. Will go back and check your answers. You are as fast as a bunny :) SusunW ( talk) 20:18, 10 April 2020 (UTC)
I was able to find images of Rebecca Lee Crumpler but noticed this article says none survived. Not sure what to make of that or know how to add a graphic image to a wiki article, but it bothered me that there is a picture of her husband but the article says none exist of Dr Lee Wikikatzed ( talk) 19:32, 20 July 2020 (UTC)
I can find no evidence that Dr. Crumpler was trained in or practiced homeopathy. The Directory of Deceased American Physicians lists her as an “Allopath”. Homeopathy at B.U. came later. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 74.69.123.20 ( talk) 15:16, 22 August 2020 (UTC)
Although her primary focus was on the health of women and children, which seemed to be influenced by homeopathy, Crumpler recommended courses of treatment without stating that the treatment was homeopathic.
I made several edits to the article here, so I thought I would summarize where I am coming from.
If I have made some changes that you may think are incorrect, it would be good to know and come up with a good alternative.– CaroleHenson ( talk) 18:42, 18 July 2023 (UTC)
Jcejhay, I am so sorry that I reverted your edit. I did it accidentally and didn't know it until I went to my watchlist and saw that I made a change to this article. I have put it back in.– CaroleHenson ( talk) 02:03, 20 March 2024 (UTC)