Much of the article is just bulleted and cluttered lists. A lot of the article reads like a guide, in my opinion. Also, the story is a bit long. Perhaps a complete rewrite is needed? RobJ1981 11:25, 25 September 2007 (UTC)
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Much of the article is just bulleted and cluttered lists. A lot of the article reads like a guide, in my opinion. Also, the story is a bit long. Perhaps a complete rewrite is needed? RobJ1981 11:25, 25 September 2007 (UTC)