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Reviewer: TonyTheTiger ( talk · contribs) 06:38, 29 March 2012 (UTC) reply

Please merge all the minor league seasons (2004-7) into one subsection.-- TonyTheTiger ( T/ C/ BIO/ WP:CHICAGO/ WP:FOUR) 06:38, 29 March 2012 (UTC) reply

They have been merged. Sanfranciscogiants17 ( talk) 11:29, 29 March 2012 (UTC) reply

I will spend some time with this article over the weekend.-- TonyTheTiger ( T/ C/ BIO/ WP:CHICAGO/ WP:FOUR) 13:45, 29 March 2012 (UTC) reply

Professional career

• Is 2004 his first professional experience? It seems like the San Diego Padres subsection should say that he did not acquire any professional experience during that time.-- TonyTheTiger ( T/ C/ BIO/ WP:CHICAGO/ WP:FOUR) 07:29, 31 March 2012 (UTC) reply

• I'm not sure. He may have played in the Dominican Summer League while with the Padres, but I can't seem to find stats for it. Sanfranciscogiants17 ( talk) 11:19, 31 March 2012 (UTC) reply

In general, I think you should link to season articles in the text. A sentence like "He gave up three runs over seven innings while striking out six, but he received a no decision in a 7–6 victory over the San Francisco Giants" should link to the proper Giants season as should all references to teams he is not playing for.-- TonyTheTiger ( T/ C/ BIO/ WP:CHICAGO/ WP:FOUR) 07:44, 31 March 2012 (UTC) reply

Once again, I do not think this is necessary. I have never needed to do that before when working on a good article, and I do not believe I need to now. Sanfranciscogiants17 ( talk) 11:19, 31 March 2012 (UTC) reply

Dude, you have about a half dozen GA credits. I am approaching 300. Believe me when I say, that linking to the team season helps the reader a lot more. You should go back and fix the other few GAs you have. Although I do mostly football and basketball this is still relevant in baseball. Teams differ from year to year. Please reformat your team links and try to make a habit of it. Also, if you review, try to get other editors to link to team seasons.-- TonyTheTiger ( T/ C/ BIO/ WP:CHICAGO/ WP:FOUR) 15:00, 31 March 2012 (UTC) reply

Changed team links. Sanfranciscogiants17 ( talk) 17:55, 31 March 2012 (UTC) reply

• Please link the team seasons and MLB years on first appropriate use. I.E., not team seasons for transactions to a franchise.-- TonyTheTiger ( T/ C/ BIO/ WP:CHICAGO/ WP:FOUR) 14:29, 1 April 2012 (UTC) reply

• Fixed. Sanfranciscogiants17 ( talk) 20:58, 1 April 2012 (UTC) reply

• Is there a way to work in the 2008 and 2009 Reds?-- TonyTheTiger ( T/ C/ BIO/ WP:CHICAGO/ WP:FOUR) 21:44, 1 April 2012 (UTC) reply
• Done. Sanfranciscogiants17 ( talk) 22:35, 1 April 2012 (UTC) reply

• Great work. I am going to PASS this now.-- TonyTheTiger ( T/ C/ BIO/ WP:CHICAGO/ WP:FOUR) 01:19, 2 April 2012 (UTC) reply
• Thanks! Sanfranciscogiants17 ( talk) 10:43, 2 April 2012 (UTC) reply