Throughout the article, link "Sahara", "thriller", "Waking the Dead", "Zimbabwean", "Western Mail", and "Dido" to their correspondence articles. Since this article is Welsh, in the Career section, wouldn't "cancel" be "cancelled"? Also, per
here. Same section, could the dates be given ---> "Ayola's other notable television appearances include the BBC psychological thriller Green-Eyed Monster, soap opera EastEnders, Channel 4 drama Offenders, as well as Waking the Dead, London's Burning, Murder in Mind, The Canterbury Tales and Sea of Souls", so that it can
provide context for the reader.
B.
Reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
It would help if an image can be inserted to the article, so it can illustrate the significance of it. But, if an image can't be found, I won't fail the article because of that.
Overall:
Pass or Fail:
If the statements above can be answered, I will pass the article. Good luck with improving this article!
Many thanks for your review! I believe I've addressed all the points you raised, apart from the lack of an image. Much as I would like the include one, there are unfortunately none available in the public domain at the present time. I will, however, be sure to add one should one become available in the future :)
Frickative22:41, 8 December 2008 (UTC)reply
No problem, just trying to help. Yes, you've gotten the concerns and thank you. Like I've said, I can't fail the article because there's no image, so its fine. Thank you to Frickative for getting the stuff I left at the talk page, because I have gone off and placed the article as GA. Congrats. ;) -- ThinkBlue (HitBLUE)22:57, 8 December 2008 (UTC)reply
Throughout the article, link "Sahara", "thriller", "Waking the Dead", "Zimbabwean", "Western Mail", and "Dido" to their correspondence articles. Since this article is Welsh, in the Career section, wouldn't "cancel" be "cancelled"? Also, per
here. Same section, could the dates be given ---> "Ayola's other notable television appearances include the BBC psychological thriller Green-Eyed Monster, soap opera EastEnders, Channel 4 drama Offenders, as well as Waking the Dead, London's Burning, Murder in Mind, The Canterbury Tales and Sea of Souls", so that it can
provide context for the reader.
B.
Reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
It would help if an image can be inserted to the article, so it can illustrate the significance of it. But, if an image can't be found, I won't fail the article because of that.
Overall:
Pass or Fail:
If the statements above can be answered, I will pass the article. Good luck with improving this article!
Many thanks for your review! I believe I've addressed all the points you raised, apart from the lack of an image. Much as I would like the include one, there are unfortunately none available in the public domain at the present time. I will, however, be sure to add one should one become available in the future :)
Frickative22:41, 8 December 2008 (UTC)reply
No problem, just trying to help. Yes, you've gotten the concerns and thank you. Like I've said, I can't fail the article because there's no image, so its fine. Thank you to Frickative for getting the stuff I left at the talk page, because I have gone off and placed the article as GA. Congrats. ;) -- ThinkBlue (HitBLUE)22:57, 8 December 2008 (UTC)reply