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Reviewer: Two Hearted River ( paddle / fish) 14:40, 1 July 2011 (UTC) reply

This GAN is being quick-failed because no relevant changes have been made since the previous reviewer correctly noted that the prose is severely lacking. I, too, recognized this upon reading the first paragraph. I strongly suggest a copyedit from The Guild of Copyeditors before nominating again. Two Hearted River ( paddle / fish) 14:40, 1 July 2011 (UTC) reply

Edit: in fact, I see the article was re-nominated not even six hours after the first nomination failed. Two Hearted River ( paddle / fish) 14:50, 1 July 2011 (UTC) reply