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Reviewer: Caponer ( talk · contribs) 13:51, 22 February 2015 (UTC)
Jackyd101, I will complete a thorough and comprehensive review of this article within the next 48 hours. Please let me know if you have any questions or comments for me in the meantime. Thanks again! -- Caponer ( talk) 13:51, 22 February 2015 (UTC)
Jackyd101, I have completed my review of this article and I find that it easily meets the criteria for Good Article status. I do, however, have a few comments and questions that should be addressed prior to its passage to Good Article status. Thank you again for all your hard work on this article! -- Caponer ( talk) 14:14, 22 February 2015 (UTC)
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Thanks for a very detailed review. I've made the grammatical edits and added an image. The only thing I haven't done is as the am to 08:00 - this is a 24 hour time (8 in the evening would be 20:00) and as you've said I mentioned that it was morning. Hope that's not a problem.-- Jackyd101 ( talk) 16:14, 22 February 2015 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Caponer ( talk · contribs) 13:51, 22 February 2015 (UTC)
Jackyd101, I will complete a thorough and comprehensive review of this article within the next 48 hours. Please let me know if you have any questions or comments for me in the meantime. Thanks again! -- Caponer ( talk) 13:51, 22 February 2015 (UTC)
Jackyd101, I have completed my review of this article and I find that it easily meets the criteria for Good Article status. I do, however, have a few comments and questions that should be addressed prior to its passage to Good Article status. Thank you again for all your hard work on this article! -- Caponer ( talk) 14:14, 22 February 2015 (UTC)
Lede
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Raid
Aftermath
Thanks for a very detailed review. I've made the grammatical edits and added an image. The only thing I haven't done is as the am to 08:00 - this is a 24 hour time (8 in the evening would be 20:00) and as you've said I mentioned that it was morning. Hope that's not a problem.-- Jackyd101 ( talk) 16:14, 22 February 2015 (UTC)