"The fire spread to the flammable glove box materials, including plexiglass windows and rubber gloves" These materials caught fire? ★★
King∽~Retrolord★★06:33, 23 July 2013 (UTC)reply
The authors of the paper referenced at the end of the sentence. I added the word "authors" to the beginning of the sentence to try to make it clearer. Any ideas on how to better present the estimates of the total Pu release would be most welcome.
The measurements for Pu release are a bit unwieldy, and might be picked up on if you go to FA, however, they are not a problem here. I can't really think of a better way to phrase it, so leaving as is may be best. ★★
King∽~Retrolord★★04:21, 24 July 2013 (UTC)reply
Ok, I think I have addressed anything. I have a couple of questions above, so please let me know in your answers if additional fixes are needed. Thanks again!
VQuakr (
talk)
04:14, 24 July 2013 (UTC)reply
"The fire spread to the flammable glove box materials, including plexiglass windows and rubber gloves" These materials caught fire? ★★
King∽~Retrolord★★06:33, 23 July 2013 (UTC)reply
The authors of the paper referenced at the end of the sentence. I added the word "authors" to the beginning of the sentence to try to make it clearer. Any ideas on how to better present the estimates of the total Pu release would be most welcome.
The measurements for Pu release are a bit unwieldy, and might be picked up on if you go to FA, however, they are not a problem here. I can't really think of a better way to phrase it, so leaving as is may be best. ★★
King∽~Retrolord★★04:21, 24 July 2013 (UTC)reply
Ok, I think I have addressed anything. I have a couple of questions above, so please let me know in your answers if additional fixes are needed. Thanks again!
VQuakr (
talk)
04:14, 24 July 2013 (UTC)reply