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The screenshot needs a description to be connected to the article, otherwise it's decorative (->fairuse-policy) -- elias. hc 08:47, 21 May 2006 (UTC)
The page should have some of the examples of Engrish used throughout the course of the game.
Why? Pretty much every game with English released in Japan has 'Engrish'... its a pretty infantile thing to point out. 207.172.52.41 23:19, 10 June 2007 (UTC)
- Here, Engrish is very notable! -- Artman40 ( talk) 20:39, 19 December 2008 (UTC)
- But it certainly needs a reception section. -- Artman40 ( talk) 12:00, 26 January 2009 (UTC)
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Reviewer: TheJoebro64 ( talk · contribs) 20:14, 4 April 2018 (UTC)
I'll finish this by the end of the week. JOE BRO 64 20:14, 4 April 2018 (UTC)
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@ TarkusAB: Overall, this article is fantastic. I just have a few points:
- I'd link to porting when it is first mentioned in the lead. Same thing goes for development.
- The story of Radiant Silvergun is told non-linearly through animated videos and scripted dialogue between stages—I think you might need a reference for this, as it's sort of an original claim.
- The title "Radiant Silvergun" is in reference to an early concept for the game → The title
"Radiant Silvergun"is in reference to an early conceptfor the game - None of the publications (CVG, GameSpot, etc.) in the reception section have links to their respective pages.
- The hyphen in "rerelease" is unneeded. Standard style is to omit the hyphen in "re-" words unless it causes an ambiguous meaning (example: "recover" vs. "re-cover").
That's all I found. I think your articles get better every time, Tarkus. Nice work. JOE BRO 64 23:55, 9 April 2018 (UTC)
- @ TheJoebro64: Thanks for reviewing. I am pretty busy this week irl, but will get to Shade and this when I have some time. May not be until weekend. TarkusAB talk 13:43, 10 April 2018 (UTC)
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The screenshot needs a description to be connected to the article, otherwise it's decorative (->fairuse-policy) -- elias. hc 08:47, 21 May 2006 (UTC)
The page should have some of the examples of Engrish used throughout the course of the game.
Why? Pretty much every game with English released in Japan has 'Engrish'... its a pretty infantile thing to point out. 207.172.52.41 23:19, 10 June 2007 (UTC)
- Here, Engrish is very notable! -- Artman40 ( talk) 20:39, 19 December 2008 (UTC)
- But it certainly needs a reception section. -- Artman40 ( talk) 12:00, 26 January 2009 (UTC)
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Reviewer: TheJoebro64 ( talk · contribs) 20:14, 4 April 2018 (UTC)
I'll finish this by the end of the week. JOE BRO 64 20:14, 4 April 2018 (UTC)
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@ TarkusAB: Overall, this article is fantastic. I just have a few points:
- I'd link to porting when it is first mentioned in the lead. Same thing goes for development.
- The story of Radiant Silvergun is told non-linearly through animated videos and scripted dialogue between stages—I think you might need a reference for this, as it's sort of an original claim.
- The title "Radiant Silvergun" is in reference to an early concept for the game → The title
"Radiant Silvergun"is in reference to an early conceptfor the game - None of the publications (CVG, GameSpot, etc.) in the reception section have links to their respective pages.
- The hyphen in "rerelease" is unneeded. Standard style is to omit the hyphen in "re-" words unless it causes an ambiguous meaning (example: "recover" vs. "re-cover").
That's all I found. I think your articles get better every time, Tarkus. Nice work. JOE BRO 64 23:55, 9 April 2018 (UTC)
- @ TheJoebro64: Thanks for reviewing. I am pretty busy this week irl, but will get to Shade and this when I have some time. May not be until weekend. TarkusAB talk 13:43, 10 April 2018 (UTC)