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[1] Ratnakar Bank has re-branded to RBL Bank
( 180.179.116.20 ( talk) 10:18, 5 August 2014 (UTC))
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Hi! In an attempt to clean up this article, I would like to suggest some changes in it starting from the 'History' section. As noted in my User page and above on this Talk page, I have a conflict of interest in this subject as part of my ongoing work at Performics.Convonix. Due to this, I will not be editing the article directly, and instead will be requesting changes here to volunteer editors. Thank you for all the help in advance. Please feel free to get in touch with me in case of anything.
I'll start with changes in the 'History' section as noted below (along with references for each paragraph) -
Current: In August 1943, Ratnakar Bank(formarly named as) was a regional bank in Maharashtra with two branches in Kolhapur and Sangli. It used to serve to the small and medium business merchants in the Kolhapur-Sangli belt. In August 1959, the Bank was categorised as a "Scheduled Commercial Bank" within the meaning of the Reserve Bank of India Act, 1934. RBL Bank was referred to as NH4 Bank since most of its occupation was limited to the cities in the 1,235-km highway National Highway 4 that connected four of the 10 most dense cities in India.
In July 2010, Ratnakar Bank introduced Mr. Vishwavir Ahuja as the Managing Director & CEO. The Bank now has a management consisting of qualified individuals in the field of banking, finance, agriculture and other related fields. Since then, RBL has had some noteworthy investors such HDFC Limited, Gaja Capital, Norwest Ventures, CDC Group Plc, Aditya Birla Private Equity, IDFC SPICE Fund, ICICI Lombard General Insurance, etc.
Suggested: In August 1943, Ratnakar Bank was founded as a regional bank in Maharashtra with two branches in Kolhapur and Sangli. It mainly served small and medium enterprises (SMEs) and business merchants in the Kolhapur-Sangli belt. It was incorporated in Kolhapur district on 14 June 1943 as ‘The Ratnakar Bank Limited’.<ref name="ET History">{{Cite news |url= https://economictimes.indiatimes.com/rbl-bank-ltd/infocompanyhistory/companyid-7750.cms|title= Company History - RBL Bank Ltd.|first= |last= |date= |accessdate= February 15, 2019|website=economictimes.indiatimes.com |publisher=[[The Economic Times]]}}</ref>
In August 1959, the bank was categorized as a " scheduled commercial bank" as per the Reserve Bank of India Act, 1934. During this decade, it was referred to as an “NH4 Bank” since most of its services were limited to the cities in the 1,235-km highway national highway 4 that connected four of the ten most-dense cities in India. In 1970, it received a banking license from the Reserve Bank of India (RBI).<ref>{{Cite news |url= https://www.business-standard.com/article/finance/ratnakar-bank-from-nh4-to-nh8-112112300028_1.html|title= Ratnakar Bank: From NH4 to NH8|first= Somasroy|last= Chakraborty|date= January 20, 2013|accessdate= February 15, 2019|website=business-standard.com |publisher=[[Business Standard]]}}</ref>
In July 2010, Vishwavir Ahuja took over as the managing director and CEO of the bank. On 26 August 2014, the name of the bank was changed to ‘RBL Bank Limited’. The rebranding was carried out to appeal to the new-age customers and stakeholders. The same year, SEBI gave it the status of a merchant banker.<ref name="ET History"/>
Explanation: Copyediting, removal/addition of information, addition of references.
Please let me know if I can be of any more help. Thanks. Convo Agent One ( talk) 10:45, 15 February 2019 (UTC)
Regards, Spintendo 16:08, 15 February 2019 (UTC)
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Hello! Further in my attempt to clean up/expand this article, I would like to request a few suggestions. As noted before on this page, I have a conflict of interest with this article. Hence, I will not be editing it directly. Here are the suggestions:
Please let me know in case the suggestions are incorrect or if there's a need for more information. Thank you. Convo Agent One ( talk) 09:09, 28 March 2019 (UTC)
Below you will see where proposals from your request have been quoted with reviewer decisions and feedback inserted underneath, either accepting, declining or otherwise commenting upon your proposal(s). Please read the enclosed notes within the proposal review section below for information on each request.
Spintendo
10:20, 28 March 2019 (UTC)
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Hello! This is a follow-up to my previous COI edit requests. Following are my suggestions -
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RBL Bank services large corporations,
small and medium enterprises (SMEs), and agricultural, retail, and
low-income customers.
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RBL Bank made its stock market debut on 31 August, 2016 with an initial public offering of INR 1,211 crore. It received the highest subscription (at 69.62 times) in that time among
IPOs of private sector banks. It is listed on both
National Stock Exchange (NSE) and
Bombay Stock Exchange (BSE).
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Please let me know in case of any queries in the requests. Thank you. Convo Agent One ( talk) 11:30, 31 May 2019 (UTC)
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"RBL Bank services large corporations, small and medium enterprises (SMEs), and agricultural, retail, and low-income customers."This proposed sentence conflicts slightly with the second sentence of the lead section.
Regards, Spintendo 14:32, 31 May 2019 (UTC)
Notes
1. Referring a
good article where such a section has been added. Is there another way to add such information even if it can be decided that it should be added?
2. Sure. I suggest removing that line completely from the lead and adding this new line under 'Operations'. Since the lead section is the summary of the entire body of the article, I figured this should be added in the body too. The lead can be rewritten once the entire body has been cleaned, revised.
3. Per
WP:INFOBOXREF, the content inside the infobox should be mentioned anywhere else in the body. This is the reason I suggested a separate section. Plus, this information could change in future, so a separate section might always be useful for readers.
4. Providing a new source that clearly mentions the listing date as August 31, 2016. Please use the following:
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RBL Bank made its stock market debut on 31 August, 2016 with an initial public offering of INR 1,211 crore. It received the highest subscription (at 69.62 times) in that time among
IPOs of private sector banks. It is listed on both
National Stock Exchange (NSE) and
Bombay Stock Exchange (BSE).
[1]
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Spintendo: - Thank you for your assistance. I have replied to some of the points above. Please consider.
Convo Agent One (
talk)
10:54, 4 June 2019 (UTC)
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Hello! Suggesting a separate section for two independently notable awards the subject has won. Please consider adding this under a section titled "Awards and recognition" or a suitable alternative.
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Ernst & Young Entrepreneur of the Year Award - Financial Services (Vishwavir Ahuja)
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2. IDRBT Banking Technology Excellence Award - Best Bank Award for Cyber Defence among Small Banks [4] |
Thank you for your assistance. Convo Agent One ( talk) 11:13, 4 June 2019 (UTC)
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Regards, Spintendo 02:28, 5 June 2019 (UTC)
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[1] Ratnakar Bank has re-branded to RBL Bank
( 180.179.116.20 ( talk) 10:18, 5 August 2014 (UTC))
References
{{
cite web}}
: External link in |website=
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help); Missing or empty |title=
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help)
![]() | This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered. |
Hi! In an attempt to clean up this article, I would like to suggest some changes in it starting from the 'History' section. As noted in my User page and above on this Talk page, I have a conflict of interest in this subject as part of my ongoing work at Performics.Convonix. Due to this, I will not be editing the article directly, and instead will be requesting changes here to volunteer editors. Thank you for all the help in advance. Please feel free to get in touch with me in case of anything.
I'll start with changes in the 'History' section as noted below (along with references for each paragraph) -
Current: In August 1943, Ratnakar Bank(formarly named as) was a regional bank in Maharashtra with two branches in Kolhapur and Sangli. It used to serve to the small and medium business merchants in the Kolhapur-Sangli belt. In August 1959, the Bank was categorised as a "Scheduled Commercial Bank" within the meaning of the Reserve Bank of India Act, 1934. RBL Bank was referred to as NH4 Bank since most of its occupation was limited to the cities in the 1,235-km highway National Highway 4 that connected four of the 10 most dense cities in India.
In July 2010, Ratnakar Bank introduced Mr. Vishwavir Ahuja as the Managing Director & CEO. The Bank now has a management consisting of qualified individuals in the field of banking, finance, agriculture and other related fields. Since then, RBL has had some noteworthy investors such HDFC Limited, Gaja Capital, Norwest Ventures, CDC Group Plc, Aditya Birla Private Equity, IDFC SPICE Fund, ICICI Lombard General Insurance, etc.
Suggested: In August 1943, Ratnakar Bank was founded as a regional bank in Maharashtra with two branches in Kolhapur and Sangli. It mainly served small and medium enterprises (SMEs) and business merchants in the Kolhapur-Sangli belt. It was incorporated in Kolhapur district on 14 June 1943 as ‘The Ratnakar Bank Limited’.<ref name="ET History">{{Cite news |url= https://economictimes.indiatimes.com/rbl-bank-ltd/infocompanyhistory/companyid-7750.cms|title= Company History - RBL Bank Ltd.|first= |last= |date= |accessdate= February 15, 2019|website=economictimes.indiatimes.com |publisher=[[The Economic Times]]}}</ref>
In August 1959, the bank was categorized as a " scheduled commercial bank" as per the Reserve Bank of India Act, 1934. During this decade, it was referred to as an “NH4 Bank” since most of its services were limited to the cities in the 1,235-km highway national highway 4 that connected four of the ten most-dense cities in India. In 1970, it received a banking license from the Reserve Bank of India (RBI).<ref>{{Cite news |url= https://www.business-standard.com/article/finance/ratnakar-bank-from-nh4-to-nh8-112112300028_1.html|title= Ratnakar Bank: From NH4 to NH8|first= Somasroy|last= Chakraborty|date= January 20, 2013|accessdate= February 15, 2019|website=business-standard.com |publisher=[[Business Standard]]}}</ref>
In July 2010, Vishwavir Ahuja took over as the managing director and CEO of the bank. On 26 August 2014, the name of the bank was changed to ‘RBL Bank Limited’. The rebranding was carried out to appeal to the new-age customers and stakeholders. The same year, SEBI gave it the status of a merchant banker.<ref name="ET History"/>
Explanation: Copyediting, removal/addition of information, addition of references.
Please let me know if I can be of any more help. Thanks. Convo Agent One ( talk) 10:45, 15 February 2019 (UTC)
Regards, Spintendo 16:08, 15 February 2019 (UTC)
![]() | Part of an edit requested by an editor with a conflict of interest has been implemented. [See below] |
Hello! Further in my attempt to clean up/expand this article, I would like to request a few suggestions. As noted before on this page, I have a conflict of interest with this article. Hence, I will not be editing it directly. Here are the suggestions:
Please let me know in case the suggestions are incorrect or if there's a need for more information. Thank you. Convo Agent One ( talk) 09:09, 28 March 2019 (UTC)
Below you will see where proposals from your request have been quoted with reviewer decisions and feedback inserted underneath, either accepting, declining or otherwise commenting upon your proposal(s). Please read the enclosed notes within the proposal review section below for information on each request.
Spintendo
10:20, 28 March 2019 (UTC)
Proposal review 28-MAR-2019
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|
![]() | This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered. |
Hello! This is a follow-up to my previous COI edit requests. Following are my suggestions -
Extended content
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Extended content
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Extended content
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RBL Bank services large corporations,
small and medium enterprises (SMEs), and agricultural, retail, and
low-income customers.
[5]
|
Extended content
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RBL Bank made its stock market debut on 31 August, 2016 with an initial public offering of INR 1,211 crore. It received the highest subscription (at 69.62 times) in that time among
IPOs of private sector banks. It is listed on both
National Stock Exchange (NSE) and
Bombay Stock Exchange (BSE).
[6]
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Please let me know in case of any queries in the requests. Thank you. Convo Agent One ( talk) 11:30, 31 May 2019 (UTC)
References
"RBL Bank services large corporations, small and medium enterprises (SMEs), and agricultural, retail, and low-income customers."This proposed sentence conflicts slightly with the second sentence of the lead section.
Regards, Spintendo 14:32, 31 May 2019 (UTC)
Notes
1. Referring a
good article where such a section has been added. Is there another way to add such information even if it can be decided that it should be added?
2. Sure. I suggest removing that line completely from the lead and adding this new line under 'Operations'. Since the lead section is the summary of the entire body of the article, I figured this should be added in the body too. The lead can be rewritten once the entire body has been cleaned, revised.
3. Per
WP:INFOBOXREF, the content inside the infobox should be mentioned anywhere else in the body. This is the reason I suggested a separate section. Plus, this information could change in future, so a separate section might always be useful for readers.
4. Providing a new source that clearly mentions the listing date as August 31, 2016. Please use the following:
Extended content
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RBL Bank made its stock market debut on 31 August, 2016 with an initial public offering of INR 1,211 crore. It received the highest subscription (at 69.62 times) in that time among
IPOs of private sector banks. It is listed on both
National Stock Exchange (NSE) and
Bombay Stock Exchange (BSE).
[1]
[2]
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@
Spintendo: - Thank you for your assistance. I have replied to some of the points above. Please consider.
Convo Agent One (
talk)
10:54, 4 June 2019 (UTC)
![]() | This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest was declined. [See below] |
Hello! Suggesting a separate section for two independently notable awards the subject has won. Please consider adding this under a section titled "Awards and recognition" or a suitable alternative.
Extended content
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1.
Ernst & Young Entrepreneur of the Year Award - Financial Services (Vishwavir Ahuja)
[3]
2. IDRBT Banking Technology Excellence Award - Best Bank Award for Cyber Defence among Small Banks [4] |
Thank you for your assistance. Convo Agent One ( talk) 11:13, 4 June 2019 (UTC)
References
Regards, Spintendo 02:28, 5 June 2019 (UTC)