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The result was: promoted by
SL93 (
talk)
13:52, 19 June 2022 (UTC)
Created by Pseud 14 ( talk). Self-nominated at 17:56, 15 May 2022 (UTC).
ALT1: ... that
Regine Velasquez's aerial performance (pictured) during
R2K: The Concert was inspired by the opening segment of
Paula Abdul's
Under My Spell Tour?
Source: February 19, 2019.
" Regine Velasquez-Alcasid looks back on her R2K concert".'
Jeepney TV interview (in Tagalog) – via
YouTube. 00:05 minutes in. Translation "I saw Paula Abdul’s concert and she was flying [with wires], it was at the Folk Arts Theater, and I was so impressed, so I told myself, I’ll do that too"; Long, Ernie. (August 2, 1992).
Paula Abdul's show, short but spellbinding. "She began the event singing the title song to her recent hit album "Spellbound" by being pulled from beneath the stage to the top of the stage by wires"
I'm doing a re-review to let preppers know if this article is ready to be promoted:
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QPQ: Done. |
Overall:
ALT2 approved
Z1720 (
talk)
15:19, 18 June 2022 (UTC)
Hey Pseud 14, doing my thing as usual here:
Announced in January, and held during two consecutive nights in April 2000 at the Araneta Coliseum in Quezon City, the concerts were part of Velasquez's campaign in support of her tenth studio album R2K (1999).Looking at the concert synopsis, was it just the same concert being performed twice? The subject seems to be about one concert rather an actual series.
[T]he concerts were her first performance in a large-scale indoor arena production.Similar to above. Should this be treated in the singular?
In retrospect, Elvin Luciano from CNN Philippines called it "the most iconic image" of the singer, while Lo termed it a "decidedly daring or risky action".Emphasis added, wikilink removed. I'm not sure the emphasised phrase is being used correctly; what are you trying to convey by saying in retrospect? It means to look backwards (at a past event).
Cited by a foreign magazine as one of the best shows in Asia in the last 25 years [...]This is closely paraphrased from the synopsis of the source video. Which magazine? As it is it comes off as promotional.
It is not representative of all concerts for the duration shows.What's a duration show?
Velasquez commissioned Rajo Laurel [...]Wikilink removed. Not a copyediting issue, but the subject doesn't appear at the page provided. — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 19:49, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
Looking forward to your answers. — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 19:49, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
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Reviewer: K. Peake ( talk · contribs) 10:04, 25 June 2022 (UTC)
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I will review this one tomorrow! -- K. Peake 10:04, 25 June 2022 (UTC)
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so there is the right space between personnel and roles Can someone please remove the pictures of literal sh*t posted by a guy called "scatman". And also ban the user? This is today's featured article so millions of people are seeing this????? 78.18.215.167 ( talk) 13:12, 8 April 2023 (UTC)
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Archive 1 |
The result was: promoted by
SL93 (
talk)
13:52, 19 June 2022 (UTC)
Created by Pseud 14 ( talk). Self-nominated at 17:56, 15 May 2022 (UTC).
ALT1: ... that
Regine Velasquez's aerial performance (pictured) during
R2K: The Concert was inspired by the opening segment of
Paula Abdul's
Under My Spell Tour?
Source: February 19, 2019.
" Regine Velasquez-Alcasid looks back on her R2K concert".'
Jeepney TV interview (in Tagalog) – via
YouTube. 00:05 minutes in. Translation "I saw Paula Abdul’s concert and she was flying [with wires], it was at the Folk Arts Theater, and I was so impressed, so I told myself, I’ll do that too"; Long, Ernie. (August 2, 1992).
Paula Abdul's show, short but spellbinding. "She began the event singing the title song to her recent hit album "Spellbound" by being pulled from beneath the stage to the top of the stage by wires"
I'm doing a re-review to let preppers know if this article is ready to be promoted:
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems |
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Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation |
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Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px. |
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QPQ: Done. |
Overall:
ALT2 approved
Z1720 (
talk)
15:19, 18 June 2022 (UTC)
Hey Pseud 14, doing my thing as usual here:
Announced in January, and held during two consecutive nights in April 2000 at the Araneta Coliseum in Quezon City, the concerts were part of Velasquez's campaign in support of her tenth studio album R2K (1999).Looking at the concert synopsis, was it just the same concert being performed twice? The subject seems to be about one concert rather an actual series.
[T]he concerts were her first performance in a large-scale indoor arena production.Similar to above. Should this be treated in the singular?
In retrospect, Elvin Luciano from CNN Philippines called it "the most iconic image" of the singer, while Lo termed it a "decidedly daring or risky action".Emphasis added, wikilink removed. I'm not sure the emphasised phrase is being used correctly; what are you trying to convey by saying in retrospect? It means to look backwards (at a past event).
Cited by a foreign magazine as one of the best shows in Asia in the last 25 years [...]This is closely paraphrased from the synopsis of the source video. Which magazine? As it is it comes off as promotional.
It is not representative of all concerts for the duration shows.What's a duration show?
Velasquez commissioned Rajo Laurel [...]Wikilink removed. Not a copyediting issue, but the subject doesn't appear at the page provided. — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 19:49, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
Looking forward to your answers. — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 19:49, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
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Reviewer: K. Peake ( talk · contribs) 10:04, 25 June 2022 (UTC)
Good Article review progress box
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I will review this one tomorrow! -- K. Peake 10:04, 25 June 2022 (UTC)
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so there is the right space between personnel and roles Can someone please remove the pictures of literal sh*t posted by a guy called "scatman". And also ban the user? This is today's featured article so millions of people are seeing this????? 78.18.215.167 ( talk) 13:12, 8 April 2023 (UTC)