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Reviewer: Hahc21 ( talk · contribs) 02:55, 8 January 2013 (UTC)
Okay. Everything else seems good but the lead. Try to check at other song articles to see which is the best way to write the lead and mimick that style. Its current state is a bit weird. — ΛΧΣ 21 03:04, 9 January 2013 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Hahc21 ( talk · contribs) 02:55, 8 January 2013 (UTC)
Okay. Everything else seems good but the lead. Try to check at other song articles to see which is the best way to write the lead and mimick that style. Its current state is a bit weird. — ΛΧΣ 21 03:04, 9 January 2013 (UTC)