The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Reviewer: MSincccc ( talk · contribs) 09:39, 25 December 2023 (UTC)
1. Well-written: | ||
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1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. |
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1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. | |
2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
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2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. |
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2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). |
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2c. it contains no original research. | |
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2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism. |
Earwig is fine: 32 per cent at the highest, flagging the description of the coat of arms (which can't be paraphrased). Tim O'Doherty ( talk) 10:37, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
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3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
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3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. |
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3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). | |
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4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. |
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5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | |
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
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6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. |
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6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. |
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7. Overall assessment. |
The GA reviewer has asked me to take a look at the 1a and 3b aspects. From a quick buzz through the article I'd say the summary style used is actually quite good, with not as much detail as some of the other articles. As for prose, as usual I recommend removing commas after dates when not a parenthetical clause; merging some short paragraphs; and fixing false titles and complying with MOS:JOB (example: "First Lady of Ukraine Olena Zelenska" would become "the first lady of Ukraine, Olena Zelenska"). Tim O'Doherty ( talk) 17:22, 5 January 2024 (UTC)
On 13 May 2007 Daniel was bornis correct but
On 13 May, 2007, Daniel was bornis incorrect. The Oxford Style Guide did not contain any info on how to use dates and commas together, only clarifying that it should be 13 April instead of April 13 in British English. I will leave this part for later and instead focus on the other suggestions for the time being. Keivan.f Talk 07:15, 6 January 2024 (UTC)
On 13 May 2007, Daniel was born- Most accurate
In May 2007, Daniel was bornor
In May 2007 Daniel was born-Both are equally correct.
In 2007 Daniel was born- Most accurate.
MSincccc ( talk) 07:41, 6 January 2024 (UTC)
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Reviewer: MSincccc ( talk · contribs) 09:39, 25 December 2023 (UTC)
1. Well-written: | ||
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1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. |
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1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. | |
2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
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2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. |
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2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). |
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2c. it contains no original research. | |
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2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism. |
Earwig is fine: 32 per cent at the highest, flagging the description of the coat of arms (which can't be paraphrased). Tim O'Doherty ( talk) 10:37, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
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3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
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3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. |
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3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). | |
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4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. |
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5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | |
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
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6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. |
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6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. |
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7. Overall assessment. |
The GA reviewer has asked me to take a look at the 1a and 3b aspects. From a quick buzz through the article I'd say the summary style used is actually quite good, with not as much detail as some of the other articles. As for prose, as usual I recommend removing commas after dates when not a parenthetical clause; merging some short paragraphs; and fixing false titles and complying with MOS:JOB (example: "First Lady of Ukraine Olena Zelenska" would become "the first lady of Ukraine, Olena Zelenska"). Tim O'Doherty ( talk) 17:22, 5 January 2024 (UTC)
On 13 May 2007 Daniel was bornis correct but
On 13 May, 2007, Daniel was bornis incorrect. The Oxford Style Guide did not contain any info on how to use dates and commas together, only clarifying that it should be 13 April instead of April 13 in British English. I will leave this part for later and instead focus on the other suggestions for the time being. Keivan.f Talk 07:15, 6 January 2024 (UTC)
On 13 May 2007, Daniel was born- Most accurate
In May 2007, Daniel was bornor
In May 2007 Daniel was born-Both are equally correct.
In 2007 Daniel was born- Most accurate.
MSincccc ( talk) 07:41, 6 January 2024 (UTC)