Thanks--looking forward to working with you. --
Khazar2 (
talk) 16:42, 15 December 2012 (UTC)reply
Just as a side note, I thought I should warn you that I might be in hospital for part of the coming week and I'm not sure what Internet access I'll have. So if I disappear for a week, please be patient--I'll be back! --
Khazar2 (
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The LEAD reads well. Make sure that each section of the main body is summarized in the LEAD.--
TonyTheTiger (
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Italicize all magazines and newspapers, including The St. Petersburg Times and Vice.--
TonyTheTiger (
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WP:FOUR) 16:12, 19 December 2012 (UTC)reply
Done.
"Pussy Riot have..." this is a single band Pussy Riot has.
merge or expand this paragraph: "This performance led to the arrest and prosecution of three of their members."--
TonyTheTiger (
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WP:FOUR) 19:15, 19 December 2012 (UTC)reply
"The trial of the three women started in Moscow's Khamovniki District Court on July 30". say the full date with YYYY.--
TonyTheTiger (
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WP:FOUR) 14:59, 22 December 2012 (UTC)reply
Where is the closing quotation mark for "His statements are lies, in the name..."--
TonyTheTiger (
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No Wikipedia article appears to exist for "anti-extremism"; I'm fine with your adding a red link if you like, though. --
Khazar2 (
talk) 18:15, 23 December 2012 (UTC)reply
Wikilink to
Federal List of Extremist Materials should cover it. This is a particularly Russian use of the term "extremist" so not sure if linking to the more generic English wiki article on
extremism is relevant.
MaxBrowne (
talk) 23:46, 23 December 2012 (UTC)reply
It's not a legal term that I'm aware of. The original phrasings of the sources are "Earlier, Pazukhina told RAPSI that the court has rejected freed Pussy Riot member Yekaterina Samutsevich's request to be involved in this claim. The reason was that no claim by the prosecutor's office to have the video declared extremist had yet reached the court" and "Samutsevich requested to be involved as a stakeholder to the case, saying that if the video were found extremist, it would be more difficult for the punk group's members to defend themselves at the supervisory instance and in the consideration of their appeal at the European Court of Human Rights." --
Khazar2 (
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It seems to be similar, but not quite the same. In the US, I think legal standing only refers to your right to initially file a lawsuit; this seems to be her right to participate in the case. There probably is specific Russian legal language to cover this, but I'm not sure how to find it. --
Khazar2 (
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"Materials declared extremist are blacklisted, making it a criminal offense to disseminate them."
This is not absolutely clear in the source, but strongly implied to be Russia as a whole; it's a national ministry doing the blacklisting, and compared to Chinese Internet censorship. --
Khazar2 (
talk) 18:35, 23 December 2012 (UTC)reply
Public opinion in Russia
A series of Levada Center polls: clarify when this poll occured in relation to the events (following the trial, following the arrest, after all appeals or whatever).--
TonyTheTiger (
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Clarified. --
Khazar2 (
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Merge or expand the "In August, at the Embassy of Russia in Washington, D.C. there was a protest and concert by punk bands." paragraph.--
TonyTheTiger (
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Spelling fixed, linked, country added. --
Khazar2 (
talk) 14:55, 26 December 2012 (UTC)reply
Restored "Tbilisi" spelling (Georgian:თბილისი). Clearly the letter "ი" (i) occurs three times in the Georgian spelling. It is also the spelling used in the wiki article and agrees with the
unofficial,
official and
ISO 9984 systems of Romanization of Georgian. It's also used in both of the refs provided, and gets more google hits than "Tblisi". So the evidence looks overwhelming.
MaxBrowne (
talk) 01:38, 27 December 2012 (UTC)reply
Thanks, Max--my eyes must be going. --
Khazar2 (
talk) 02:12, 27 December 2012 (UTC)reply
Both photos are taken from the same facebook album.
[1]. The photographer specifically granted a
creative commons license. — Preceding
unsigned comment added by
MaxBrowne (
talk •
contribs) 02:56, 24 December 2012 (UTC)reply
Thanks--looking forward to working with you. --
Khazar2 (
talk) 16:42, 15 December 2012 (UTC)reply
Just as a side note, I thought I should warn you that I might be in hospital for part of the coming week and I'm not sure what Internet access I'll have. So if I disappear for a week, please be patient--I'll be back! --
Khazar2 (
talk) 15:01, 26 December 2012 (UTC)reply
The LEAD reads well. Make sure that each section of the main body is summarized in the LEAD.--
TonyTheTiger (
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C/
BIO/
WP:CHICAGO/
WP:FOUR) 15:43, 19 December 2012 (UTC)reply
Italicize all magazines and newspapers, including The St. Petersburg Times and Vice.--
TonyTheTiger (
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BIO/
WP:CHICAGO/
WP:FOUR) 16:12, 19 December 2012 (UTC)reply
Done.
"Pussy Riot have..." this is a single band Pussy Riot has.
merge or expand this paragraph: "This performance led to the arrest and prosecution of three of their members."--
TonyTheTiger (
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BIO/
WP:CHICAGO/
WP:FOUR) 19:15, 19 December 2012 (UTC)reply
"The trial of the three women started in Moscow's Khamovniki District Court on July 30". say the full date with YYYY.--
TonyTheTiger (
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WP:FOUR) 14:59, 22 December 2012 (UTC)reply
Where is the closing quotation mark for "His statements are lies, in the name..."--
TonyTheTiger (
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WP:FOUR) 06:13, 23 December 2012 (UTC)reply
No Wikipedia article appears to exist for "anti-extremism"; I'm fine with your adding a red link if you like, though. --
Khazar2 (
talk) 18:15, 23 December 2012 (UTC)reply
Wikilink to
Federal List of Extremist Materials should cover it. This is a particularly Russian use of the term "extremist" so not sure if linking to the more generic English wiki article on
extremism is relevant.
MaxBrowne (
talk) 23:46, 23 December 2012 (UTC)reply
It's not a legal term that I'm aware of. The original phrasings of the sources are "Earlier, Pazukhina told RAPSI that the court has rejected freed Pussy Riot member Yekaterina Samutsevich's request to be involved in this claim. The reason was that no claim by the prosecutor's office to have the video declared extremist had yet reached the court" and "Samutsevich requested to be involved as a stakeholder to the case, saying that if the video were found extremist, it would be more difficult for the punk group's members to defend themselves at the supervisory instance and in the consideration of their appeal at the European Court of Human Rights." --
Khazar2 (
talk) 18:35, 23 December 2012 (UTC)reply
It seems to be similar, but not quite the same. In the US, I think legal standing only refers to your right to initially file a lawsuit; this seems to be her right to participate in the case. There probably is specific Russian legal language to cover this, but I'm not sure how to find it. --
Khazar2 (
talk) 14:38, 26 December 2012 (UTC)reply
"Materials declared extremist are blacklisted, making it a criminal offense to disseminate them."
This is not absolutely clear in the source, but strongly implied to be Russia as a whole; it's a national ministry doing the blacklisting, and compared to Chinese Internet censorship. --
Khazar2 (
talk) 18:35, 23 December 2012 (UTC)reply
Public opinion in Russia
A series of Levada Center polls: clarify when this poll occured in relation to the events (following the trial, following the arrest, after all appeals or whatever).--
TonyTheTiger (
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WP:CHICAGO/
WP:FOUR) 19:08, 23 December 2012 (UTC)reply
Clarified. --
Khazar2 (
talk) 14:55, 26 December 2012 (UTC)reply
Merge or expand the "In August, at the Embassy of Russia in Washington, D.C. there was a protest and concert by punk bands." paragraph.--
TonyTheTiger (
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BIO/
WP:CHICAGO/
WP:FOUR) 01:07, 24 December 2012 (UTC)reply
Spelling fixed, linked, country added. --
Khazar2 (
talk) 14:55, 26 December 2012 (UTC)reply
Restored "Tbilisi" spelling (Georgian:თბილისი). Clearly the letter "ი" (i) occurs three times in the Georgian spelling. It is also the spelling used in the wiki article and agrees with the
unofficial,
official and
ISO 9984 systems of Romanization of Georgian. It's also used in both of the refs provided, and gets more google hits than "Tblisi". So the evidence looks overwhelming.
MaxBrowne (
talk) 01:38, 27 December 2012 (UTC)reply
Thanks, Max--my eyes must be going. --
Khazar2 (
talk) 02:12, 27 December 2012 (UTC)reply
Both photos are taken from the same facebook album.
[1]. The photographer specifically granted a
creative commons license. — Preceding
unsigned comment added by
MaxBrowne (
talk •
contribs) 02:56, 24 December 2012 (UTC)reply