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I had intended to do a bit of work sourcing and formatting the various citations throughout this article but after taking a closer look I'm wondering if it might also need some pretty substantial editing down and rephrasing? The tone of several sections seems very academic and technical and I don't know that a lot of the direct quotes included are particularly necessary. Just curious if anyone else has any thoughts on how best to proceed? Nsteffel ( talk) 03:38, 26 November 2014 (UTC) reply

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Untitled

I had intended to do a bit of work sourcing and formatting the various citations throughout this article but after taking a closer look I'm wondering if it might also need some pretty substantial editing down and rephrasing? The tone of several sections seems very academic and technical and I don't know that a lot of the direct quotes included are particularly necessary. Just curious if anyone else has any thoughts on how best to proceed? Nsteffel ( talk) 03:38, 26 November 2014 (UTC) reply


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