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Orbited 1965-68, three on test flights of the UR-500 ICBM and one on a Proton-K rocket, all four completed their missions successfully, the last reentering in 1969.- sentence doesn't have a clear subject. What orbited? And orbited around what?
The Proton satellites were heavy...- why is "proton" in bold? It is already bolded in the lede
These satellites, made from purpose-built third stages...- not really sure what this means. They only had a third stage? Third stages of what? Please clarify
...with a scientific package developed under the supervision...- they had the same single package? Suggest "with scientific packages"
The entire package massed 4,000 kg (8,800 lb) was composed...- this is confusing. Suggest adding commas around the "massed 4,000 kg (8,800 lb)" or some other tool to split the two ideas of the sentences (the mass, and what the package was composed of)
A measuring device comprising one lump of carbon and another of polyethylene...- the measuring device was likely comprised of the coal and polyethylene
Proton 1 was orbitedand
Proton 3 was successfully orbited- the satellites orbited something (earth?) I assume, rather than the satellites themselves being orbited
...and the satellite reentered 11 October 1965and similar descriptions for the other three satellites - reentered what?
The result was: promoted by
Joofjoof (
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18:55, 29 January 2021 (UTC)
Improved to Good Article status by Neopeius ( talk). Self-nominated at 00:06, 5 January 2021 (UTC).
There seems to be inconsistency in whether the specific Protons, e.g. Proton 3 (on the main page right now) should be in italics or not. This article uses both formats (which is a little concerning given it's a GA!) What's the right answer? The Rambling Man ( Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 12:10, 5 February 2021 (UTC)
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Reviewer: DannyS712 ( talk · contribs) 07:02, 1 January 2021 (UTC)
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Orbited 1965-68, three on test flights of the UR-500 ICBM and one on a Proton-K rocket, all four completed their missions successfully, the last reentering in 1969.- sentence doesn't have a clear subject. What orbited? And orbited around what?
The Proton satellites were heavy...- why is "proton" in bold? It is already bolded in the lede
These satellites, made from purpose-built third stages...- not really sure what this means. They only had a third stage? Third stages of what? Please clarify
...with a scientific package developed under the supervision...- they had the same single package? Suggest "with scientific packages"
The entire package massed 4,000 kg (8,800 lb) was composed...- this is confusing. Suggest adding commas around the "massed 4,000 kg (8,800 lb)" or some other tool to split the two ideas of the sentences (the mass, and what the package was composed of)
A measuring device comprising one lump of carbon and another of polyethylene...- the measuring device was likely comprised of the coal and polyethylene
Proton 1 was orbitedand
Proton 3 was successfully orbited- the satellites orbited something (earth?) I assume, rather than the satellites themselves being orbited
...and the satellite reentered 11 October 1965and similar descriptions for the other three satellites - reentered what?
The result was: promoted by
Joofjoof (
talk)
18:55, 29 January 2021 (UTC)
Improved to Good Article status by Neopeius ( talk). Self-nominated at 00:06, 5 January 2021 (UTC).
There seems to be inconsistency in whether the specific Protons, e.g. Proton 3 (on the main page right now) should be in italics or not. This article uses both formats (which is a little concerning given it's a GA!) What's the right answer? The Rambling Man ( Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 12:10, 5 February 2021 (UTC)