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Nominator: MSincccc ( talk · contribs)
Reviewer: Tim O'Doherty ( talk · contribs) 16:45, 21 March 2024 (UTC)
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16:45, 21 March 2024 (UTC)
Since the article's so short there isn't much need for a table...
Prose:
her grandmother Diana, Princess of Wales- we have just "Charles" in the same sentence: "Diana" alone'll do.
On 4 May, ..., etc - commas aren't needed
She joined her brother Prince George- I'd put "older brother" here
On 8 September 2022, Charlotte's paternal great-grandmother Elizabeth II died- again with the comma, but you've told us who her great-grandmother is already: "Elizabeth" or "the Queen" will be fine.
Due to the implementation of the Perth Agreement-> "Because of the implementation of the Perth Agreement"
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Good article overall. Some issues need fixing, but nothing too serious. Pinging MSincccc. Cheers, Tim O'Doherty ( talk) 19:39, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
On 8 September 2022,...This requires a comma as it is a full date rather than just the year or the month followed by the year. Removed publisher locations and also retaining "BBC News" not "BBC" as the former is more common. Regards MSincccc ( talk) 02:13, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
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Nominator: MSincccc ( talk · contribs)
Reviewer: Tim O'Doherty ( talk · contribs) 16:45, 21 March 2024 (UTC)
Reviewing upon request. Will begin today or tomorrow.
Tim O'Doherty (
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16:45, 21 March 2024 (UTC)
Since the article's so short there isn't much need for a table...
Prose:
her grandmother Diana, Princess of Wales- we have just "Charles" in the same sentence: "Diana" alone'll do.
On 4 May, ..., etc - commas aren't needed
She joined her brother Prince George- I'd put "older brother" here
On 8 September 2022, Charlotte's paternal great-grandmother Elizabeth II died- again with the comma, but you've told us who her great-grandmother is already: "Elizabeth" or "the Queen" will be fine.
Due to the implementation of the Perth Agreement-> "Because of the implementation of the Perth Agreement"
Sources:
Images...
are fine.
Good article overall. Some issues need fixing, but nothing too serious. Pinging MSincccc. Cheers, Tim O'Doherty ( talk) 19:39, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
On 8 September 2022,...This requires a comma as it is a full date rather than just the year or the month followed by the year. Removed publisher locations and also retaining "BBC News" not "BBC" as the former is more common. Regards MSincccc ( talk) 02:13, 23 March 2024 (UTC)